Dancing on pipe dream clouds ~

Dancing on pipe dream clouds

within the realm of promises

castles in bauble's celebrations

prancing in gaiety upon

chimera's contemplative infatuation

confections floating on aria's burst'd ambiance

burbles of shots in the dark

gambling reflections merely surmis'd

wishing on stardust's elusive possibilities 

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You never fail to envelop me into your world of words Mrs.R...everything you write is pure magic. Dancing on pipe dream clouds...feels like everything not involving depression and loneliness is a pipe dream these days. Stirring up so much positivity and negativity is something only your talent can do. My poems sport one mood and that is all. Another jaw-dropping peace from the pen of Frieda, ho-hum ;D xo

[Frieda P]

Your words are magic Benji, doing the happy dance...grazie! ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

I've said it before but you know I love making you dance Mrs.R :) xo

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, the ashes of a pipe dream referred to as the collective stardust of what makes up the universe. The chimera used as a metaphor for emotions, completely different yet felt simultaneously in the same body. Dancing in the clouds to symbolize the profound effects that a pipe dream can stir within you, however unrealistic (perhaps being in the clouds is a metaphor for refusing to see the Earth for what it is?). You've enveloped me with this, well one.

[paddy d daly]

mystical stuff, I feel like i'm in the land of the fairies,,,, then again maybe I am,,,, seriously though, a really lovely piece.....

[uberteff]

your poetry stirs my imagination...a LOT..! I should probably read a poem of yours every morning..!

[DIVYA]

"prancing in gaiety upon

chimera's contemplative infatuation

confections floating on aria's burst'd ambiance

burbles of shots in the dark

gambling reflections merely surmis'd

wishing on stardust's elusive possibilities "


We all have those moments when we think everything is possible! Perfectly written Frieda!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the elusive pipe dreams, but you do manage to capture them in words....hopeful words.

another Frieda special, contractionalized for our enjoyment.

[Saddam]

I am flying at seventh sky.

[s y e]

Again, I am in my own little safe haven, Mama F - You just put me right up on cloud 9. I am totally speechless, this just touched me.

Flip flops & a 100 sighs... xo

[Chris Micha]

I felt like I was in Neverland...loved it!

[Bright Ocean Star]

"prancing in gaiety on chimera's contemplative infatuation" beautiful phrases, Frieda. I love this. It is so dreamy and wistful. Thank you for sharing this piece.

[Sami Khalil]

Out of chance, not worht it, no useful are those pipe dreams and some could be expired. But we gamble our reflections on wishing wells and catch the illusive smoke mirrors...Another excellent poem...:)..........