Seeking validation ~

Seeking validation ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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...of scribbles & all that chicken scratch ;-)

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poetry, a magical elixir's inclination  
attempting to recompense karma
taking liberties within a poet's foundation
ambivalence in the silence of voices
memories cut like a knife
or make the spirit soar,
inky finger's dabbling in intercourse
expression in articulation's transformation
within past tribulations & present ploys
circumventing a future's inscriptions,  
metaphorical artfulness or deception  
as far as the eye can comprehend 
pen'd of blood, sweat and tearful plights 
flights of fancy and the mundane
flowing reminisces on manifestation's pages  
peeking into another soul's elucidation 
decryption of dire straits and perplexities, 
abstruseness, conundrums & cliffhangers
interpretation's sweet and sour nuances 
written in destiny's inscrutableness
each a mirror'd enigma unto ourselves
seeking validation in poetic mystification


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Oh my, Frieda, lots of stuff here. You missed all the fun when you were gone. I will have to fill you in on how I was told poets who have no specific metre and timing and rhyme have styles unrecognizable and are all the same! HA! No one can match nor duplicate your unique sense of wordage and the way you cobble it all together ...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

So kind of you to say KL...I pay no mind to those that pontificate on 'proper' poetry, if I feel it,.. read more



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This is quite a powerful piece, Frieda and I am sure no matter whether dark, sad, happy, joyful your friends here will be thrilled to read you again.

This was amazing and the imagery created within your words and your lines is very powerful. Where would we be without poetry, it helps relieves stress and helps us move on when life gets tough. I really liked this and can relate to it.

Well done on this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Grazie mille noodlebumble...poetry does help, almost as good as a day at the beach. :-)
s y e

9 Years Ago

I think a good day at the beach AND poetry helps... With a wee glass of champers. #perfection
Looks like you altered this one a bit since I first read it. Can't find the words to say how much I love it. You know just how to paint a picture of the love of poetry and all its wonder. Wouldnt life be grey and lifeless without it...even the ones where we are purging? It makes my day to see your words here again...youve had some rough bumps in the road lately. But like the survivor you are I know you will keep moving on...xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Just a tad, but I left your fav line in. ;-) Thanks red, good to be back...yep, butterfly warriors .. read more
You validate poetry not just through writing and sharing but by your wonderful presence among us. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

We all missed you. You know it. You are welcome...:).............................
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Was a really rough month, you wouldn't have wanted to deal with me, so I did you a favor ;-)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:)..................................

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Tags: poetry, destiny, mystification, sharing, inclination, magic, past, present, flight

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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