[Suffocation Senryu]

You suffocate me

when you watch my every move,

~

need to take a breath

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Well this I can relate too but you know, it's not always a bad thing. Sometimes knowing that someone is watching out for us is a good thing to know. In this case, I guess not and I know I wouldn't like someone watching me 24/7 but it happens and we can't stop it. We live with it and move on.

[Frieda P]

Hmm suffocating always seemed bad to me, 'looking out' for someone is a totally different animal...thanks Sye.

[Frieda P]

Only til I was blue in the face, that's what happens when someone suffocates you...

[Rob Santana]

Awww, I thought this was about the heavy meta bandl SUFFOCATION. Good piece though.

[Frieda P]

Sorry to disappoint Rob, but I could suffocate you, I bet you're into that kind of kinky stuff ha ;-)

[Rob Santana]

Hehehe, yup. Will you scratch me too? Hah

[Frieda P]

Ha you're in luck, I just sharpened my claws ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Tough, to find the balance between loving and suffocating ... I want to watch you every moment, but I have to trust you.

[Frieda P]

Now trust, that's the key isn't it? Thanks so much KL>

[Madalyn Beck]

Know how that goes! This is easy for all to relate to. We've all felt suffocated by another at some point. *cough* My mom. *cough* *cough*

Just saying. Your point has been made in three short lines. Perfect. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha coughing right along with you....I hear that pain! Thanks Mads. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Having known people in relationships with control freaks, this is spot on Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, tell your buddies to head for the hills.....

[redflutterby]

Three lines that say all that needs to be said...talk to the hand!! There will always be people who dont get it... x

[Frieda P]

So true, thanks red. x