~Kiss my tush, Dr Seuss

Silliness to knock Dale's Seuss off

You know I can't rhyme

but it's still all fine

in my own box

I'm sly as a fox

would you care to share

when life isn't fair

I'll read you here or there

in the cafe or on the lot

just give me all you've got

I like them with tears

or filled with fears

spicy and hot to trot

or downright full of rot

whatever your heart desires

jot it down and i'll be wired

        till the next edition

             I bid you adieu

for the last time,

I told you I can't rhyme 

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Move over Dr. Suess...Frieda's rhyming in perfect timing!
I want to see what you can do with One Fish, Two Fish...

Love this one my friend!

just give me all you've got
I like them with tears
or filled with fears
spicy and hot to trot
or downright full of rot

Laughing out loud!!!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Haha now you're pushing it Julie ;) Thanks muchly, it was fun!

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I really like this! I love the concept and the flow! Great job! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Michael! :)

[kublakhan27]

You won't believe me, but you're a better rhymer than you give yourself credit for...as self-deprecating as this piece is, your talent refuses to be denied...you really can take any form and make it your own, and the same goes for emotions...I am happy when I read such works from you Mrs.R, I'd like to think you're in good spirits at the time :) xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the reinforcement Benji, but not really, I can do some silly stuff, but when it comes to serious rhyme I'm completely lost....Mrs R had a moment of silly girl giggles yes haha ;) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Silly girl giggles...that just sounds funny...try running that phrase through your mind and not laughing, it's impossible ;) xo

[icelandicblue]

In a house
with a mouse-

rhyme is in your blood or it isn't but either way it's effective. : )

[Frieda P]

Only thing in my blood is red wine and evoo ;) ha...thanks muchly, glad you enjoyed my attempt.

[icelandicblue]

Cosmos is mine. ; )

[Frieda P]

I have a vodka drip to temper the Italiano ;)

[icelandicblue]

LOL- it was so passe but I couldn't come up with a different drink without a menu. ; )

[Frieda P]

Oh jeez, you're a lightweight, how about a dirty martini? ;)

[icelandicblue]

I am such a lightweight...but yet I try. ; )

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love this 'in your face' attitude about old Dr. Seus. I am a huge Dr. Seus fan, but you prove every day that you don't have to rhyme to be a drop dead awesome poet. Great job!!!!

[Frieda P]

I love Dr Seuss too, and I'll leave the rhyming up to him and others that know their stuff hereinafter, thanks Star!

[Relic]

you do fine with a rhyme just give it time and drink some wine so don't be shy and christ now i know why i suck now.

[Frieda P]

HAHA I'm good with the wine, perhaps I can rhyme...thanks Relic! ;)

[Relic]

I hear its sublime. :)

[Frieda P]

I'll take my time ;)

[Relic]

try eating a lime.

[Frieda P]

they make me whine...

[Relic]

Oh, I'm sure you'll be fine.

[Frieda P]

that's just a line

[Relic]

Yeah, but its mine.

[Frieda P]

It's a crime...

[Relic]

I know, I'm a swine.

[Frieda P]

you have no spine

[Relic]

People say that's a bad sign.

[Frieda P]

You're so benign

[Relic]

Its in my bloodline.

[Frieda P]

I heard it through the grapevine.

[Relic]

Were you laying supine?

[Frieda P]

Yes I had a beer stein...

[Relic]

I'd rather have twine.

[Frieda P]

I'm gonna have to decline.....

[Relic]

What, no punch line?

[Frieda P]

I wasn't inclined.

[Relic]

You should meet Jack pine.

[Frieda P]

Oh I hear he's divine.

[Relic]

He works on a production line.

[Frieda P]

Funny I heard it was turbine.

[Relic]

It's better than a poverty line.

[Frieda P]

you don't want that design

[Relic]

No, no you don't. lol

[Frieda P]

Refrigerator, what you gave up?!! haha

[Relic]

all I see on rhymezone is line this and line that. hahaha

[Frieda P]

Try the twilight zone...ha

[Relic]

I have every episode, it won't work. ha

[Frieda P]

Now I have that eerie music in my head, thanks!

[Relic]

You're travelling through another dimention.

[Frieda P]

This is the dimension of imagination...

[Relic]

You've just crossed over into...

[Frieda P]

the CAFE haha

[Girl With A Pen]

This is a very enjoyable read :) Rolls off the tongue perfectly

[Frieda P]

Thanks glad you enjoyed my attempt at rhyming... :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I am Laughing so Hard I simply loved this.

I love Dr. Seuss nicely penned my friend.


very nicely done.






You know I can't rhyme

but it's still all fine

in my own box

I'm sly as a fox

would you care to share

when life isn't fair

I'll read you here or there

in the café or on the lot


Thank you for sharing this Lovely Tongue twister and thank you
for your kind review and comments you left on my page.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Now you're making me laugh....my kids favorite book when they were younger was Green Eggs & Ham, I must have read it a thousand times, it's no wonder I can't rhyme now....thanks so much kindred poet!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well He is an amazing Poet like many on here. What can I say I am a Big Kid at heart and I read Dr. Seuss to my son when he was smaller also He's 14teen now growing up so fast and such a handsome boy a good Kid. you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I love reading your work. blessings. kindred poet

[Baby Ricochet]

My writing has been compared to Dr Seuss. I like this poem

[Frieda P]

NO way, far from it Baby....thanks.

[Matching Socks]

Oh, it's goin' down like THAT is it?
I gotta pass the Queen of Cute Fluff crown on to my girl friend over here...
Girl just rocked a rhyme... Right on time.
She's tricky tricky tricky....

[Frieda P]

Yeah and I'm flippin exhausted now, my mind doesn't think that way haha......

[Matching Socks]

You did an OUTSTANDING job. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks, it was fun :)

[sharonlee]

Hehehe... quirky & fun... I wrote a Seuss inspired poem once :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks sharonlee, you should enter it in Dale's contest.... :)

[sharonlee]

Oh didn't know he was running one! I'll check my archives.

[Frieda P]

Just started today, the Seuss bug bit him...