Casanova's just desserts ~ COLLABORATION APRIL & FRIEDA

there was no actual carnage in the making of this poem, we wrote to the enticing graphic_Ben Newman Art

She languished in licking the nectar

            from her succulent lips

cherry wine still bleeding,

           poetically onto her dainty hankie

fleshy nourishment still clung

                  to her every whim

she dabbled some more where

          his lying guts had been forsaken

a severed treat with peach preserves

                  lavished on a silver platter

         of half baked intentions

                   and sticky betrayal's emotions

   still pulsating with promises

                 as useless as his manipulations

crooked Casanova caught this pretty kitty’s claws

      retracted in slippery satisfaction,

                 dripping with delight

    deliciously steaming from his just desserts

the cherry of his eye now so appetizing

       beefy treat he bragged on and on

went down in one gulp's demise

      sans blood sweat & tears at the table

one lump or two with that sassy tongue

        hardly matters when its been twice bitten

wicked woman indulging as justice is served,

    washed it all down with a nice vintage chianti

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Hey girls"! You really make a deadly pair... a poem again from the divine combo... well this forces me to lick the nectar off!!.. lol the picture here is dripping with red wine of temptation... i guess every man here is gonna ogle that pic first and review the poem last.. hah!! You both have really vividly described the image. Two style merged together- i liked this amalgation. Girls gimme warning next time you have something burning in your page ★winks★

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

We were channeling our Bobbitt connection. :) Thanks Sophy, jazz'd you enjoyed out twisted romp.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I loved this twist.. pleasure as always :)

[AprilRN1210]

thank you girl, glad you enjoyed it...

[Jack Wolfe]

Skillfully crafted, murderous, the language down right appetizing; it’s good to see you ladies creeping deeper into the Darkside. The two of you blend very well, and offer a vivid scene of poetic imagery.

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you Doc... ha.. yes... well.. guess we are having fun playing on the dark side... what can I say?... I am glad you enjoyed this one... she is such a joy to work with... :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, more twisted than dark, me thinks...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok vixens the gloves are off! Such a brutal slaughter of an innocent! One has to rise to defend the faith. Another seamless contribution to the two women who make the caffe rock...............or is that who make the coffee in the cafe?

[Frieda P]

Oh the gloves were off long ago dear!

[AprilRN1210]

innocent?.... ha!! hardly...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yeah well put your money.....................in your bill fold!

[Frieda P]

Who's innocent that bloody guy, you know who that is, right? haha

[Rene Salinas]

Oh praise the lord I have bled while watching this band. Went to watch Hatebreed but this was playing on he other tent. I think I hoped and prayed for her to fly of the stage into our arms. Dream on brother! Back to the task at hands the Cafe is melting into one another collaborations right left and centre I am struggling to keep up. Tried and tested this collaboration weaves into one another creative opinions. What stands for me the most is that you both seem not afraid to take control, to dictate the pace, to let the outcome be dictated by your actions. And when it is all said and done. cheers with a glass of wine.

Thankyou

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you Rene.. glad you enjoyed... cheers:)
you have made me giggle... love it...

[Frieda P]

Ha the lord came nowhere near this poem. ;) Thanks so much Rene. Cheers.

[ron]

Well I guess Casanova caught one to many kittens, remind me never to go looking again :)

[Frieda P]

Ahh another brave soul....let this be a lesson to ya. Thanks ron, I hardly think you're that ruthless. :)

[ron]

You are most welcome. Maybe not ruthless...

[AprilRN1210]

haha... I guess he did... nice lesson to walk away with... thanks Ron...

[ron]

Yes a very interesting lesson April.
You are most welcome.

[AprilRN1210]

haha... I am sure... fun indeed...

[Mark]

OMG… (coming out from under the couch;) do you mind if I just sit and watch? I’ll review later, after the blood bath;)

[Frieda P]

We cleaned up quite nicely, there's no blood left haha Thanks Mark, you're a brave soul!!

[AprilRN1210]

our first brave reviewer... hats off to ya friend.. thanks for the review... :)

[Mark]

maybe... I was under the couch remember;)

[AprilRN1210]

was... being the operative word here...

[Mark]

Stopped back in to see who was speaking, but it seems everyone has gone home to listen to Ronan Keating...?
So, review ;)
Can I just say wow? Totally unexpected but ooooohhhh so refreshing :) I'm really enjoying your collabs... its beautiful to me that I can’t tell where one voice stops and the other starts... it says a lot about the mirrored admiration within your friendship
Can’t wait for more :)
there will be more.. yes?

:)

[AprilRN1210]

This one does bite doesn't it?... lol

Was fun doing another collab with you ma'am... anytime... showing another side of that pen that is as sharp as your claws... haha... love how it turned out... RAWR.... think we scared everybody off.. :)

[Frieda P]

Might smart a bit, yep!! Ha, this was heaps of fun, a little walk on the wild side instead of the dark....I think you're right, we scared all the men folk away hahah ;)

[AprilRN1210]

might need to hand out more chicken avatars... love walking on the wild side, especially with such an awesome partner-in-crime!!
((hugs)) to you girl...

[Frieda P]

Oh geez, where's Esse...haha Sometimes you just gotta shake it up a little. MWAH!

[AprilRN1210]

he will pop in soon enough I am sure... fun times...

[Nusquam Esse]

Of course I would pop in... I happened to be at work... you know... chicken things and all. And come now, I am the type of chicken to offer excuses, not to run away. Have a little confidence in your Esse!

[AprilRN1210]

hijacking my comment box... so very chicken"esque" of you... lol

[Nusquam Esse]

you all were totally asking for it... and you know it... apparently this c**k is on the menu... :S

[AprilRN1210]

asking for what exactly?.....

[Nusquam Esse]

heh heh heh... *immature giggle*

[AprilRN1210]

mmmmhmmmm... thought so... let's hear it sir... whatcha got?... what were we "asking" for?

[Nusquam Esse]

Chicken, Rooster, C**k, Esse... they are all valid answers... ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha what did I miss here? Was lotz more on the menu....

[Nusquam Esse]

oh.... such as? I have yet to see this menu in its entirety...

[Frieda P]

That's a whole other poem...ha

[AprilRN1210]

lol..... yep

[Nusquam Esse]

now you got my interest piqued... poetic menus... is this menu only for maidens to order off of? Or am I allowed to at least order something?

[AprilRN1210]

and what would you order sir chicken?

[Nusquam Esse]

Well, I am on a diet, so I think I would go for the Spring Mix,,, If you get my drift... :P

[Nusquam Esse]

Besides, I think that sorta order goes well with chicken... :D

[Frieda P]

Don't make me say 'tastes like chicken' again..............

[Nusquam Esse]

I am not one to force such things...

[AprilRN1210]

oh my gawd you make me laugh girl..... jeez... priceless....