In the Afternoon

Haiku

Tangled willow trees The cicada's solemn song One thousand summers

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful and beuatiful

[Coyote Poetry]

It the tree is a thousand years old. It would be very good. I like the poem. I went to Northern California. The tree were old and monster to behold. Nature is very good to us. We need to be kind to her.
Coyote

[alesuriko]

Interesting haiku. I liked it right up until the last line, didn't take long to get there but still haha. The imagery was really vivid and full of the intense feel, atmosphere and smell of nature but the one thousand summers just didn't continue it for me. Maybe the transition wasn't there but either way, I liked the first two lines.