Mosquitoes

Mosquitoes

A Poem by gabiaimee

His kisses are mosquitoes on my skin,
drawing outward the life from within
the narrowest of my veins,
leaving behind an itch,
a hunger for him,
an unbearable feeling I can’t ignore.

© 2016 gabiaimee


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When I read the title, I thought it would be a funny one. But I surprised to see that you gave it a completely different meaning. The only thing is that I am eager to be kissed again, but I am definitely not interested in getting bitten by a mosquito. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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When I read the title, I thought it would be a funny one. But I surprised to see that you gave it a completely different meaning. The only thing is that I am eager to be kissed again, but I am definitely not interested in getting bitten by a mosquito. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect use of the description of need for more kisses. I liked this poem dear Poet. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If my wife compared me to a mosquito I don't think she'd mean it in a good way but it works great in this poem. Outstanding job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 22, 2016
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Tags: mosquito, kiss, love, romance, metaphor, itch, bite, veins, blood, sex, sexual, desire, want, boyfriend, girlfriend, partner, husband, wife, poem, poetry

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