February Of My Discontent

3-D group exercise: painful events in 30 words or less.

Two blue lines, a third miracle
Altar call, special blessing
Grandfather's death, anger rekindled
Back pain equates to before shock
Scarlet mass now a scarlet mess
So f**k everything metaphysical!!!

© 2011 Kenneth The Poet

Author's Note

February 2011

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Teri B

The beauty of such writing is that it teaches us the patience of the word. Best use of each brings best results in terms of the writer's satisfaction and the reader's delight and appreciation.

You have made me feel your February pain. Nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago

nicolo

It's like saying f**k you GOD!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Brad	i think that last line tied everything up nicely! Posted 13 Years Ago i think that last line tied everything up nicely! Rating /100

joshua deathdealer

Great work. I love the title and the scarlet tongue twister.

Posted 13 Years Ago

NightShade

Wow! You're not kidding about a painful event. It's a testament to your skill that you evoked such a vivid scene and raw emotions in 30 words!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Neva Flores Smith - Cha..

I am turning this one inside out and maybe I shouldn't be. Screw everything to do with reality perhaps?

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Kenneth The Poet

Bismarck, ND

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Kenneth The Poet is an optimist wrapped in the candy shell of moroseness and cynicism. He lives between the two parallels marked 46 and 49, all while living in the state marked 39. He pretends that he.. more..