A Story of an Unborn Child

A Story of an Unborn Child

A Poem by samie05

This poem was inspired by a film I saw entitled "Silent Scream". I was devastated by the film that made me and my classmates cry and feel sorry for those unborn children.

I died before I was born
I died before I could feel the warmth of the sun in my cheeks
I died before learning how to walk, talk, smile and laugh
I died before I could feel despair, joy, love or hate
I died before having my own dreams and aspirations that I would promise myself to reach it
I died before seeing my supposed to be parents but they were the ones who took the life I suppose to have

I cried
I cried and beg my parents to spare the life of their own flesh and blood
I cried the loudest cry I could make on top of my voice
I cried for the pain they're causing me to disappear and just leave me be
I cried for my parents who were suppose to have a wonderful baby girl who would love them from the bottom of her heart
I cried a silent cry that no one else could be able to hear it but me

And then, everything went blank

© 2010 samie05

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omg. that's sad, but it's really good.
btw the last "i died line" is the end suppose to was 'i was suppose to have' and not 'i suppose to have' ?

Posted 12 Years Ago

What I get from the first part of this piece is putting up the wall to put aside these feelings. Only later to cry when it all comes crashing down. This is a very sad but from the heart poem which you did an excellent job

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a good poem sad but good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 6, 2010
Last Updated on May 15, 2010
Tags: Unborn, children, cry, babies, abortion



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