50.Life's momentum, P=mv

Haiku, yet another

 

Life's momentum, P=mv

 

Souls search in darkness

 

Blossoming of self

 

pal

 

Author's Note

Here I am trying to establish purpose of life, why we all here. The first line talks of life a journey. The second links this journey is of soul in darkness and the last one indicates the purpose of our life ..blossoming of self or realization. Peace to all.

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is a lovely poem. It's so deep, and yet still manages to stay within the contraints of a haiku. I love how each line covers something different. The first tells of the basic science that is our lives, the second of the darkness we face searching for our identities, and the last - the realization of who we are. (: Atleast that's how I took it. ^_^ Very inspirational! Great write!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Definitely interesting---short, yet thoughtful. :-) Sharon

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

Lovely piece with deep emotions and in so few words.
Debby

[Blake Q Hatfield]

A scientific approach to that which science cannot truly quantify. Very interesting concept.

[Wanda S. Paryla]

I am not sure I quite understand this concept - physics is not art to me, but it's interesting and different.

[wizthom]

i never understood a phase,
being a poem concept,
as a writer it does nothing for my imagination,
visualization,
so in my opinion this is incomplete ,
makes no since to me,much like the emperors tailors ,
sarah telling of what she sees interest me ,kinda like a person who sees a ghost ,
whom am i to say it's not there ,just because i don't see it's meaning .meaning the purpose in this write.peace wizthom

[Brett Campaigne]

gives food for thought.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Good job at being concise. Thanks

[Wildfleour]

Very cool! :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

very nice...metaphysical senyru...haiku, thingy, I slept through physics, I'm an English major lol