I Wish I Had A Baby

This poem is an attempt to express the dreams and feelings of a woman who has been longing to be a mother for a long time. Waiting for a miracle to spark her life with a baby.

I wish so... much,

I had a baby.

A baby to play around,

A baby to sing a song,

At times to trouble me hard

& irritate me a lot.

I wish so... much,

I had a baby.

A baby to hug & kiss,

A baby to cry & smile,

I would keep looking at her,

while she's deep asleep.

I would hold her tight,

while she has a scary dream.

I wish so... much,

I had a baby.

My days would never be so pale,

My nights would never be so dark,

My life would be bright as sunshine.

My heart would be filled with roses of joy.

I wish so... much,

I had a baby.

A baby to be loved,

A baby to be give meaning to my life. 

Author's Note

I am looking forward for helpful and note worthy guidance . Any suggestions or corrections to improve my writing skills ?

Reviews

[sette]

actually it does not need corrections anymore as it is the thought is there, a poem does not have to rhyme what is important is the flow of thought, the depth. Just like this poem, reading between the lines i can sense the longing to have a baby to complete one's life on one hand it is considered a failure on the woman's part which makes her sad and anxious.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I think this a very good piece of writing. Just ONE thing, missing line of verse beginning 'My'
My Oh my, Why Oh why, am I so TIRED.
I've raised 3 children, Joy unfettered, Love beyond reason, Happiness incalculable and Tiredness unbelievable.
You've touched on the beauty and desires of having a child.
It makes the reader really feel for the poor writer.
Regards. Clive.

[Shonu]

Thank you so much for your sweet and valuable review. I am extremely happy to know my poem was able to convey the feelings to the readers.