Dicohtomy

Dichotomy

K ept in reserve

I keep                -                   myself

Locked as in hope chests.

Licking

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Such is the mind of a person when dichotomous thinking takes hold. Stay reserved, yet the mind races with the thought of K I L L. No in between, and once that barrier breaks and reservation is no longer an option, it all spills out.

A very intriguing one, well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... exactly! tho we can think of many explanations for the act ... they are all surface, i think ... its that "button" that stands alone and we either push it or not ...at least that is what i was pondering when i wrote this one .. thanks for taking time Tai! and for your thoughtful review
E.

[Ana Papaya]

This is outstanding. Such a sharp delivery!

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Ana ... your the greatest! :))
E.

[Ana Papaya]

aww shucks. :)
so are you!

[Tom]

Like a latent volcano waiting to erupt when trigger and time is appropriate!

Imaginatively penned E.

[Einstein Noodle]

exactly Tom! it is frightening to think we all have it within ourselves .. at least i think we do ... with many reasons that can put us in front of it .. that little red button...or trigger as you say ..thanks for stopping and reviewing sir! much appreciate it
E.

[Tom]

Or as some refer .the red mist '

[emmajoy]

Inventive, intriguing, individually YOURS.

(will return to listen to video)

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you emma! its a cool video i think ;) very much appreciate your visits ...always! love and joy!
E.

[emmajoy]

Kept my promise re. the video.. promise, cross heart, got half way... will return for the other half another time when fresh as a daisy!

[Einstein Noodle]

:) don't worry about it my friend ... it is over 4 minutes long!

[emmajoy]

Brain was tired, body was zapped, needed a lullaby.. Might try again, however.

[Einstein Noodle]

i hear you ..we had an exhausting trip to pick up our new puppy and i spent the whole day back doing nothing at all .. not a damn thing :) except drink me daily pint ;}

[emmajoy]

A pint! Only a pint?! Have fun with your new pup, lucky, lucky you.. what is it and does it have a name? (I have two darlings, have been tempted to have more but.. )

[Einstein Noodle]

i'm sending you a pic! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

emma! i went to your pages and they are closed!!! whats up?

[emmajoy]

Sorry, was out for the day, needed to close to ward off a problem!

[Einstein Noodle]

thank goodness my friend! cute little peeking avatar you have .. ;)

[emmajoy]

goes back a while!

[Ken Simm.]

This is interesting. The format assists the subject and the subject is many layered. The reader can attach their own thoughts and experiences. An excellent job.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you for stopping and reviewing my fine friend! I have been out of town a few days so must start the catch up process. i always appreciate your thoughts and impressions .. thank you!
E.

[Ken Simm.]

You are more than welcome Gene.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha E, I love the acrostic element of this and the separation between a hope chest and "kill". Great little piece. Izzy

[Einstein Noodle]

Aloha to you hula girl! ;) so happy you stopped to read and review... i am blessed by it and you always bring thoughts of palm trees and the Island to me ... better than breakfast in the morning! ;)
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

We do keep our hopes and dreams locked up tight...and perhaps that is what kills the soul. The acrostic is excellent....and the words made me think....which is always a good thing. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

love your take on this Lydia ... gratified to think it moved you to think ;) it is a good thing most times for sure! :) belated happy M- Day by the way! i have been out of town ... and beginning the catch up process. ;) love and peace!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

Hope you enjoyed your time away, E. I was away for three weeks and I feel as though I will never catch up.

[Einstein Noodle]

i hear you ... this is a fast moving gaggle of poetry isn't it!? ... almost like to much candy to pick from ..love ya!

[Lydia Shutter]

Sending hugs and hoping time will stand still a while....

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! ;)

[barleygirl]

I'm not sure I understand this one completely. I like & relate to the idea of being locked like a hope chest (that part is easy to understand & I love it) . . . but I'm not sure how the word "dichotomy" & "ill" play into this idea!??!! I'm going to have to think on this for awhile maybe! (((HUGS)))

[Einstein Noodle]

its not my norm ...its a little dark .... thank you for reading and reviewing my friend ..and especially for thinking on it a bit ...its what is locked in there that makes a difference ;) .. and the acrostic part is heavily weighted in importance .. :)
i am running later than usual .. its after 7PM and i am past due in my little hot tub ;) my neighbor is one of those farters and belchers and we hauled a 22 ft. log out of the forest for my retaining wall to be .. you would love this guy! i know your not looking and he is happy married...but you would love him for sure!
love you barley girl! :)
E.

[barleygirl]

A hot tub sounds sooo nice! Hope you had a nice evening (((HUGS)))

[Einstein Noodle]

good morning darlin' ! just took my first cleansing breath of the day ... lookin' at you smile dear friend.

[MsJewel]

Wow! Your creativity shines my friend. Powerful writing! Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

you put a smile on my face with just your avatar :) your comments are gratifying and encouraging .. great day to ya MsJewel!
E.