Yet..

inertia of the mind yet to break
thoughts emanating yet to actualize
feelings bubbling inside yet to caress
words mumbling yet to carry a meaning

yet seems to be the flavour of my life
or is it the same for you ?

Reviews

[Lydia Blackwell]

very introspective. you are digging deep. this is good.
"yet seems to be the flavour of my life"

i seem to spend a lot of my time waiting, too.
the best is "yet" to be :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

That was very thoughtful and deep. The coda of it, not only concluded the piece very well - but also succeeded in leaving a lingering effect in the mind of readers, like me. Bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you use the language. Making your point allowing the reader to fall into your thoughts. I like when a question end the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dinesh Sairam]

The complex words are unnecessary, I think. But I can vaguely figure out the meaning of the poem.

Keep writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

yet to come...there are times when we say it hasn't happened yet and wait for that moment ot come. I like the idea in this piece.

[Cherrie Palmer]

the yets in life is what keeps us looking around the next corner

[Enigma]

A sense of incompleteness, of the process in making. Excellent, thought-provoking work. :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

interesting poem...there's a whole lot of meaning hidden in this poem..and i think it's up to the readers if they will understand or if they will have an insight of deeper meaning in this poem..interesting and nice poem!!
good work!