I'll Dwell By Our Memories.

I'll Dwell By Our Memories.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I gave you my all back then

Now it seems like you threw it in a car and walked away

Didn’t look back

Didn’t think about me

Now you say

“Who the hell are you?”

I… I was your best friend…

Remember?

I was the one you shared all of your secrets with…

I was the one who helped you all day long…

You threw me in the garbage can…

I was nothing more than a puppet of yours

Nothing more than a shoulder to cry on…

I’ll never be more than that to anyone…

I’m definitely not worthy

I’m so f*****g ordinary

So, I’ll go dwell by our memories.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

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Sometime memories are all we have left. The words were honest and strong. Thank you for a excelelnt poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awh thats sad :/ I'm sorry this happened to you. I know the feeling well. But you are way more than a shoulder to cry on, you're not ordinary, you're anything but. You're amazing and never forget it (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is fully loaded and heart-breaking

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heart breaking, I can really feel the pain :( Love this poem, I can really relate

Posted 12 Years Ago


So heart breaking.. i can feel the pain as I read this. Great write! Losing a best friend is probably one of the worst pain ever. Best friends are always there for each other. For it to suddenly break... it seems so unreal..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Memories tend to be the best part of our lives

Posted 12 Years Ago


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TJ
Tragic

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good Writing! You show the reader how much pain has been caused and how it is makng you feel, memories are so powerful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dear. This is the treason.the is the lie.

you have to forget it. and complete your way

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok, this is one of the best works of yours that I have read so far. I like the honest approach, the gentle flow...this feeling of being not worthy of more really reaches the reader. Wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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