Promised to be there.

Promised to be there.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.


I've been told to let go
To move on
Yet I think of those times
Where you and I kept laughing 
Even if people thought we were crazy.

The love I had for you
Cant be compared, nor replaced
You wasnt just my best friend,
You were my sister
We may not be related
Yet I still feel that way.

I miss the times where 
We talked about everything and nothing,
Sat on the couch and all out of sudden
Burst out laughing.
Where did it all go?

I promised to be there always
Now help me sew this broken heart.

© 2014 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore grammar problems please.

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Your words are wonderful , describing the bleeding heart

Posted 9 Years Ago

I loved this! It flowed so well, keep up the great writing

Posted 9 Years Ago

That was very well said and done..
keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago

It is good to be able to read your word again. I hope you are doing okay. Regret is hard to forget and forgiveness is hard to find. Time is a healer if we are lucky. I hope for a happy ending for you. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago

A cozy ... warm ... and affectionate write about keeping promises ... and letting go. Along the way it dispenses a wisdom that is quite surprising and wonderful ... nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

i promised to be there always
Now help me sew this broken heart

Love the plea, pain and emotions in this deep poetry and above lines are pure honesty in words...simoly amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on April 2, 2014
Last Updated on April 2, 2014


A Risen Heroine.
A Risen Heroine.


Hello my dear readers, I'm so sorry I won't post that much... God bless you all. (: ~A Risen Heroine~ more..


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