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Holding a pen
I sit
Searching a poem
Which is rendering between
Heart and the mess of words
Whom eyes are trying to find
In unknown horizons
Is actually present
In the inner skies
giving a smile to me

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Clever, the moment when you look up or better said try to find your Muse in order to feel inspired as if touched by grace. Unknown the effects and the level of insipration I garee I guess will depend mainly on what you are looking.

Driven by grace

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Rene for a constructive review

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description of writing and thoughts. Writing should make us happy and make us smile. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jesse Booker]

Not sure what to write about? Write about not being sure what to write about! I like it; very cleverly done!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sindu]

The true deep turmoil laced with excitement every budding writer faces. So aptly and cleverly penned it down. Makes me smile :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Sometimes better need to stop for a while to clean word mess on different theme. If I contemplate on everything mind concludes empty nicely written.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you very much prabha :)

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[R Smith]

Keep searching Hardeep, we rely on people like yourself to provide us with poems so we can enjoy our time in this cafe' thank you :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot richard :)

[Matching Socks]

Sometimes we just need to pause with our thoughts and let the words find us.
Nice job

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Ana a lot

[Christopher Withers]

I've been in this place many times, a good write :).

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot christopher :)

[Avinash]

Short and pleasant, yet meaningful like summer breeze. Beautiful write Hardeep.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot dear Avinash :)

[George Peck]

I really like. Great job thanks for shareing

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks george for stopping by

[Baby Ricochet]

Writers block is a dreaded evil coming to get us all

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks a lot :)