Conversation

Hindi version published in Delhi magazine in may 2005 issue Translations of poetry are always not so convincing and bad part of this, I am a worst translator

What we speak in chats, commonly,
May it be socio-political
Or on some family matters and disputes
If all those words are divided
Into sections and evaluated
Nine out of ten seem worthless
Absurdily, wasting age on time parameters,,
What we speak in chats,, the same common part
Which seem worthless
Actually nourishing life
Watering with the nectar of innocence
Craving something, somewhere
Slowly transforming its worthlessness
Into nonpareil, in context of life.

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

That's very great to count all the absurd talk between the two takes place instead of conversing on sensible issues. This really a fine poem of great value.i.e. the time. We have so many issues for discussions and deducing infrences on them for the welfare of someone viz.our society...
Thanks for sharing such nice with finest message...Hardeep

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou sir

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always my dear. It's duty .I am obliged for it...

[Avinash]

This is an interesting concept. It made me notice the screen, where your words appear as poem. It has barely 10% of space with meaningful words. Rest are either empty space to enhance the beauty of your words. Everything has a purpose, even the meaningless words too, they are there to make the meaningful stand out.
A very wise write. Lately your writing is projecting deeper meaning of life and I am quite happy about that.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Avinash for such a lovely review and support :)

[George Peck]

You ade something as simple as a conversation into a magnificent poem. Great job. Thank You for letting me read.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot george :)

[MomzillaNC]

A casual chat can actually be the engine of our day.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Momzillanc

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

A very powerful write on the subject of conversations. Bravo, sir...:).................

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot sir :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......................

[Skuldaegz]

Very good. The simple conversations will ultimately be the most nourishing to our souls. Through them we take part in humanity, instead of just observing it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot my dear friend

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Would love to read the hindi version. If possible plz scan and upload.
The thoughts expressed here are wonderful.
I liked it!
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks pushkar, yes sure I will send you, give me your email address, and I feel you enjoy it more in hindi

[Pushkar Prabhat]

I will send you the address. Yes i love hindi poems. I write in hindi too. You can read them here on writerscafe. I will send you RRs of the same. It will be great to be reviewed by a published writer.

[Christopher Withers]

The extra words, which might seem empty, are a means of bonding and perhaps convey more than their echo's suggest. I really enjoyed this,a great poem!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot christopher :)

[Rene Salinas]

I agree our words carry very little meaning represented in our actions as well. Juts 10 minutes of the news will give you a good indication of where is it that we are heading. But in the meantime we "chat" to pass the time I guess and surely enough transforming worthlessness into vacuity.

Great observation here.

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much Rene for reading and giving a nice review :)