I know I'm Not Perfect

I know I'm Not Perfect

A Poem by Mir

I know I’m not perfect

Believe me, I’m aware.

But you don’t need to point it out

Every time I’m near.

 

I know I have flaws,

But I’m not the only one.

I’m not going to hid them,

Because everybody has some.

 

No, I don’t where much makeup.

I’d rather not be fake.

I don’t want to be like one of those girls,

Who need to remove their makeup with a rake.

 

I know you think I’m ugly.

Sometimes I do too.

But deep down I know I’m pretty.

Everybody is; no matter who.

© 2012 Mir


Author's Note

Mir
Wrote this awhile ago, but forgot to put it up.

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This has a great message that you should be very proud of. Sometimes it impresses me how much makeup some girls wear. It's like they dumped a bucket of gunk all over their faces. They look like baby dolls. Which brings me to my one "mistake" I noticed. You said that you don't where to much make up but the correct term is wear. Not where (as in where are you) but wear (as in you wear clothes). The two are often confused. I think you should spread the word. Only geniuses don't care about the unnatural and more about what really exists. You shouldn't think you are ugly, you have a beautiful poetic air, a personality and appearance to match. Believe in yourself. Trust me, I know it's hard. But you have to. Nicely and poetically penned my friend!
Best regards,
Dell

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

I didn't realize about my grammatical error, but thank you for pointing it out!
If I may ask,.. read more
Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Tell others. There is no need to be created by an industry.
Mir

11 Years Ago

I want to. One of my goals in life is to change how girls and guys view themselves. I'm just at a lo.. read more
Change hid to hide in this one.
It is very honest, straight forward, and states who you are.
You don't really think you are ugly though.
I like this, it tells me things about you. Keep up the good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Posted 11 Years Ago


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LOVE IT!


Posted 11 Years Ago


I absolutely love it! Thank you for sharing yourself. Lovely poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing and I'm so glad you liked it! :)
That is a nice message! I love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank You! :)

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