My Fuzzy Little Friend

Yep my Sugar Glider :)

Apple fetish,

fuzzy skin.

What a wonderful world

I am living in!

Your big black eyes,

your tiny pink nose.

That stripe down your back,

contains more then I know!

Soft and sweet,

those tiny feet.

Rest all day,

and stay wide awake all night.

You climb and play,

I love you all day!

I miss you when you are gone,

but you are never too far away!

Author's Note

ERHMER GERD! I love my new Sugar Glider. It is SOOOOOO cute! It lets us hold it now it's a bit more comfy with us! It loves to play!!! I love giving it apples! Love you Rocky hehe

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

very adorable content
sugar gliders are so darn cute
didn't know they ate apples so you taught me something*)
thank you for the cute furry critter smile

[haymaker14]

Haha thanks and NP! Apples are actually one of their favorite food (because of the sweetness I reckon!) Yes, they are adorable!!! I like to handfeed the apple sometimes, just because their teeth are so small so it looks so cute when they help hold it and make little teeth marks :) Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! :))

[Chloe]

Overall, it is a good limerick, but I have one small suggestion. Try to follow a more... how do you say.... strict syllable pattern, for lack of a better word. For example, when you say the last line, it doesn't rhyme as well because you have two more syllables in that line than the line above it. Another suggestion about word choice. A fetish is usually described as something scandalous, or at least in my world it is. :P I don't exactly think loving apples is so scandalous! But, anyhoo, it is a cute poem about an even cuter little fuzzball! Keep up the great work, you are getting better and better at writing! Hope you don't mind the criticism that much!

[haymaker14]

Lol thanks. Especially for the criticism! Fetish is something you are kind of addicted to. Like Whisper has a toe fetish. Just clearing that up. Now my dad can hold the cute little things with these gloves, and Rocky LOVES it! I get to pet him, and soon he will probaly be able to be held in normal hands and play on us! :)

[Chloe]

No, a fetish is normally described as "A course of action to which one has an excessive and irrational commitment", or in other words, something (normally bad) that you do and are obsessive with it. So, in a sense, I guess you are correct.

[haymaker14]

I searched it. It could be a desire- sexual or not. So, we were both right. Because in one way it is sexual, but it doesn't have to be to be a fetish.