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Equinox B

Equinox B

A Poem by Plagued Monumentally

The demons invade her innocent soul,

making her character a mistress of nudity,

exemplifying her bravery and strength,

in the form of sexual foreplay.

The eight inch nails of her former lover,

imprinted in the back of her memory,

like a deranged inamorata suffering from,

obsession.

Her name is lost in the mixture of evil,

her deeds are dissipated by the whistle of the fiend wind,

her echoes are lost in the cave of slavery and 

men.

"Boris Vallejo! My one, my lover, my only one."

Her eyes dance with interrupted loneliness, 

the dance of humiliation and truth shine over

the bright horizon of the evening hour.

This fear is someone who she got to know,

and she calls fear a friend,

she has  been waiting for you to return,

to make her face her insecurities, 

of her past life.

© 2011 Plagued Monumentally


Author's Note

Plagued Monumentally
Equinox B, Boris Vallego and Mistress of Nudity is apart of a "fantasy world" online. Along with the vivid pictures and imagination.

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Awesome!! Love every line to this fantastic write...Second stanza is my fave..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really like this :) you describe things SO WELL! keep up the excellent writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow what an interesting poem and to get it from a fantasy world online is very imaginative with creative words of vocabutlary for description. Anyways wonderful poem,; it really grabbed my attention.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

strong words. Sucb pasion. Love the lines fear is some thing to know. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reads like something from hispanic culture (I mean that in a good way). They always use such interesting and vivid lines that you can't help but be drawn in. Excellen write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The mistress of the 21st century explores her past with the tribes of the Huns and Celts, if only to improve the greatest promise of all - foreplay. Tumbling enthusiasm, well portrayed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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