Hold me, Thrill me, Kiss me, Kill me.

The ribbon of deceased departure,

the black silk road

that gives us a clip of the future

but the future holds nothing 

only stone cold silence

and distant glares of grudges

there was never a day

where the presence of memories

trail through my mind

like a robber trying to cover its tracks.

Why are you on your knees? Stop being foolish!

there is nothing more unattractive

than a man wanting something

that was never even there

in the first place.

People, especially men, will screw you over

and you can be manipulated

or even be contemplated

and your perception

will be reversed into

self-deception

Reviews

[DontBlink158]

I love 'The ribbon of decease departure, the black silk road". This is a amazing poem, i loved it!

[NightShade]

You never cease to impress me. Truly phenomenal work, you've composed here.

[Shep]

Hey bud. What's up. Great poem with mystery that I live for. The words grip me with astounding grace. Nicely done.

[Jazique]

can I just that I love that picture as it says so much itself wishing me to come read your words which were great. Its like a story in poetry form and you took us along for the ride with every description word that she felt. As some people are only here for the thrill but, when the ride is over their through and you the other view of them that just won't due. I really enjoyed this poem. it was interesting and entertaining; well done.

[Jupiter Jazz]

"People, especially men, will screw you over

and you can be manipulated

or even be contemplated

and your perception

will be reversed into

self-deception"

That is sooooo mother freaking true. Preach!
Where'd you get that awesome picture???

[Megan]

You need to write a book haha. This was brilliant and passionate, it was angry and honest. It kind of made me feel like you wanted to hit someone upside the head with a baseball bat. You are right though, there are many people out there who want to twist our thoughts into what they want us to believe and change us into everyone but who we truly are. The last line in the first stanza was my favorite, it was powerful and led into the next stanza really really well..thanks for posting :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You have create a powerful poem. I like the desire and strength in the words.
"there is nothing more unattractive
than a man wanting something
that was never even there
in the first place."
I like the purpose of this poem. Many will try to hurt us. We must be careful. Slow and easy does it for the emotion of love. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Very powerful..last stanza is bold and daring :) Brilliant imagery...hard hitting and I love what Lily said lol
So cool!
xx

[Marie Harrison]

Bravo!
Well written.