WhiTe NoiSe

Charged by emotions...both good and bad...I've learned to embrace it all.

WhiTe

NoiSe














         

This white noise
          it is the consequence of my instability
                                I watch in wonder
                                    as many specters rise from the unearthing
           It is time now
to harvest the fruit
                                possessed by sorcery and wonder
               let go of the restraints
                              for this ordained shepherdess; labors forth a monstrosity
                                                     another hum, I feel the thrum
                                 these birthing pains are never done.


****STATIC****


             At last
                                     this energy becomes alive
                    another tainted conception made sacred
             a thousand minutes of prayer and tribulation
       the rising blackness is now one
alive and without segregation
                                   it feeds quietly upon me
                                                 with an eager predation.


****STATIC****



                   I give in
                 dissolved by the spectrum of chaos
                                                 I'm now at peace with this beautiful desolation
    defiled and deaf
                 enlightened by the carnal knowledge
                        this confusion has been gifted
                                  by the feign
                                  that's shrouded within.

Author's Note

FYI: I want to thank all my friends for the love and support they have shown my daughter. It's because she's doing well with some new medications, that I'm finally allowed to visit my home here on WC. Much luv....thank you.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe excuse me for a second when I saw the photo With the words white noise I thought That litlle was the poem hehe :) I find it incredible how you wrote this and even the format incredible! :) You have created a very well written and provoking Poem :) Enjoyed reading it :)

[EMF]

FYI: Anytime. And I think I speak for us all.
While commited to other things, there are few RR I would look at. But yours...that's another matter all together. A stunning work, and one that will take a couple of reads to fully appreciate. I've only read it three times so far, and it is truly wonderful. Well worth the waiting for. Death, darkeness, birth and rebirth, all rolled into one. Not a poem that merits a quick review, but one that must be returned to in edit.

And back, after the chance to indulge in it, without interuption . Like any white noise it moves your head from one idea to another, making it hard to fix on one theme or idea, because you are overwhelmed by so many. Delicious. And like any white noses, it is alive and vibrant. On yet another reading it has been wonderful

[Larry Dyson]

glad all are better.. now this is an inroad to Meditation..the white noise static sound..find the bubbles within and follow them..even if they feel like negatives.. your repressed soul needs to vent them..they are not you..just a part needing balance.ooo nice start for a prose piece.. maybe ill write it?