One word

One word

A Poem by Call Me Blu

One word

One simple

Crazy

Meaningless word

And my life fell to pieces

It was never uttered aloud

Yet it hung thick

Between me and

You

Them

Everyone

No one could escape

It blacked out all the love

The glow had left my life

It felt like someone

Was killing me slowly

Draining out my life

I never had many friends

I always lost them fast

But one day I decided

Dod damn that is the last

Time the word will ruin

Me

My life

My friends

So I swept up my shattered life

Tossed it in the trash

Replaced it with love

And I was free at last

No longer could hate rule me

© 2011 Call Me Blu


Author's Note

Call Me Blu
Ehhh idk if I love it or hate it yet. Haha get it....:D.....never mind

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nice poem... you should certainly publish your poems!:D

Posted 7 Years Ago


This says a lot. A really nice write, thought thinking and emotion. I like these lines:
"So I swept up my shattered life
Tossed it in the trash"

Posted 8 Years Ago


there is nothing to say, this poem is excellent the way it is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh wow, I seriously like this poem a lot! The flow is so easy and it's rhyme is brilliant! You're an amazing poet!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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