I Miss You...?

I Miss You...?

A Poem by Forever Hidden
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Why oh why?
Why couldn't this be?
I miss you so much.
Every day, every night.
I think about you.

We only talked for a while, but it seemed like a life time.
We met again the next day.
But, sadly I had to walk away.

I know deep inside of my heart, I know we could've been.
I know that we will see each other.
If it's in this life, or the next.

I wish I could see you in a day.
I wish I could see you  tomorrow.
I wish I could see you right now.

© 2013 Forever Hidden


Author's Note

Forever Hidden
The topic we had to write it on was friends or love. O.o So I have no clue where this popped out from. It just did. >.< I don't like it to be honest... It is so cheesy. Ew. Blah. Yuck.. DX I'm probably gonna take this out in a while.. >_<

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you write songs alot don't you? its really good, i regret not reading more of your work sooner keep writing your amazing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Bahhh I'm not that amazing o.o
But thank youuuuuuu so much Jennyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.. read more
beautiful dreamer

8 Years Ago

you is welcome, and yes you are don't lie lol.
This is lovely, Hidden. ^^

Your friend will really appreciate such a great work! :)

It's pretty heart-wrenching though... :(

But I'm sure that's what you were going for! ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Felicity's Eve

8 Years Ago

You're welcome! ^^

And but of course! :D

And you're welcome...again... XD
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Felicity's Eve

8 Years Ago

M'kay! ^^
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Nice to read, sad though :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Skye

8 Years Ago

No problem. Really good poem Hidden :)
I like the best:
We only talked for a while
but it seemed like a life time...
Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


URVI JAIN

7 Years Ago

I loved it :) beautiful poem :)
Forever Hidden

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

:)............................
I liked this poem. It was cute and sincere and could be talking about anybody or even an animal or pet, so it covers many facets of possibility. Very nice!

Aaron

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
I think it's pretty good. Although I don't read peoms as well as stories, I still like how well writen it is, and the message you put into it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it :)
Dark Rider

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on September 5, 2012
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