FLY AWAY

FLY AWAY

A Poem by Forever Hidden
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Things will come
Things will change
And things will go away

Trying to find
Finding them is a waste.
Trying to overcome
Trying to fly
Trying to fly away

If you knew my life
Is different from yours
If you knew my life
You would change
If you only knew
If you only heard
If you only saw
What my life is about
What my life is about

Finding them..
Trying to overcome...
Trying to fly.....
Fly away....

© 2013 Forever Hidden


Author's Note

Forever Hidden

This is NOT a poem.

Feedback is appreciated. :D

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if it's not a poem what is it? lol a story with a rhyme scheme! :D i like it no matter what it is lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

8 Years Ago

lol THANKS SKY!!!!!
Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Is that you? :3
beautiful dreamer

8 Years Ago

mhm
Wow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thanks ^^
I can just imagine this being sung. so beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank yiu!
I messgaed you m'lady :)
I'm assuming this is a song? It's really gorgeous. Please grab a guitar and sing it for us one day? That would make this weirdo pretty happy

Posted 8 Years Ago


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sounds like a song

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

It Is....
Awesome! I love this! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Felicity's Eve

8 Years Ago

:)
I would play this on repeat for, EVER, if it were really a song! :D
Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

:D
Everyone told me the same thing XD
Maybe I should make it into a song....
Felicity's Eve

8 Years Ago

Yeah! :)
Ooh, nice song!!! :D Is it put to music?!?!?! :D I'd like to hear it actually. :P It is very expressive... Great job. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

Lol! xD That's crazy... :P
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Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

lol xD That's hysterical... xD Yup, anything you want. lol
I love this! If it were playing on the radio I would raise the volume up so every driver or person would hear it! lol Great job! 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Awww thank you!
A perfect pop song ! Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Shreyas Tripathy

8 Years Ago

Hehe ... There always is a first time :)
A song to be heard.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :D
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on October 10, 2012
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