Painless Hearts

Painless Hearts

A Poem by Forever Hidden

Read the author's note please?....


Let Me Burn.

Let Me Die.

Let the pain take over my soul.


Trying to stand my ground.

But everything around me is falling apart.

Trying to stand the pain.


The secrets are whispering all around.

The rumors are heard by every living thing.

While I stand in the corner of the room.



The tears streaming down my cheeks.

Thinking of what I would do next.


A knife lay close by.


 The carpet is soaked by blood.

The screams will never be forgotten,


My soul now lies where everything is perfect.

Where there is no pain.

No rumors.

No secrets.

Where everything is perfect.....

© 2013 Forever Hidden

Author's Note

Forever Hidden
Feedback is much appreciated! This is my first dark poems
Lol I didn't know what to put as a title so I picked a random thingy mabobber for it XD :3
Thanks for reading!

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This pretty much sums up my life. :(

Great job! ^^

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Posted 11 Years Ago

Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

I'd LOVE that!!! :D
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21 Reviews
Added on November 13, 2012
Last Updated on January 11, 2013
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