Painless Hearts

Read the author's note please?....

Let Me Burn.

Let Me Die.

Let the pain take over my soul.

 

Trying to stand my ground.

But everything around me is falling apart.

Trying to stand the pain.

 

The secrets are whispering all around.

The rumors are heard by every living thing.

While I stand in the corner of the room.

 

 

The tears streaming down my cheeks.

Thinking of what I would do next.

 

A knife lay close by.

 

 The carpet is soaked by blood.

The screams will never be forgotten,

 

My soul now lies where everything is perfect.

Where there is no pain.

No rumors.

No secrets.

Where everything is perfect.....

Author's Note

Feedback is much appreciated! This is my first dark poems
Lol I didn't know what to put as a title so I picked a random thingy mabobber for it XD :3
Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Very emotional. Sometimes in my life, I have that feeling to end it all to totally vanish my pains. But we have to be appreciative and grateful for every little thing we have. Do not count the pains, instead count all your blessings.
Sounds related to my poems "Resurrection" and "Miracle"

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[TroubledMindsX]

Ahhh this is amazing! But if you ever feel like that message me and don't ever cut or kill yourself got it? Cause I will kick your....butt.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you! :')
Lol haha okay
No promises made though x)

[TroubledMindsX]

no. promises are made got it? good.

[Forever Hidden]

Yes yes they are o.O

[Admiral Kirk]

Whoa... that sounds like... something I would write when I'm having a bad day... O,o Pretty dark... Nice job!!! :D

[Forever Hidden]

WOAHH
HUGO
THANK YOU DERP

[Admiral Kirk]

YOU'RE WELCOME.
SPEAKING OF. I GOT CALLED A RETARD TODAY.
I WAS LIKE YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS...

[Forever Hidden]

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
YOU MIGHT'VE TAKEN THAT AS A COMPLIMENT DIDN'T YA?

[Admiral Kirk]

IDK. PROBABLY CAUSE I AM. OH WELL.
...YEAH, MAYBE.

[Forever Hidden]

MAYBE
BUT LIKE
AREN;T YOU 14? O.o

[Admiral Kirk]

YES. YES I AM 14. AND A HALF, FOR THE RECORD. WHY? O,o

[Admiral Kirk]

THANK YOU.
I DO NOT WEAR MAKEUP. I'M PRETTY MASCULINE AT TIMES. HAHA, WELL RETARD IS A FUNNY WORD THAT I FEEL DESCRIBES ME PERFECTLY. DON'T YOU??? o.O

[Admiral Kirk]

:D HA! PEOPLE ARE FUNNY! I LAUGHED MY HEAD OFF TOO!!!

[Forever Hidden]

YEAH I KNOW
AND I TOLD HIM I DIDN'T CARE
AND HE'S LIKE
YOU NEED TO GO TO THE MENTAL HOSPITAL
AND I'M LIKE
BEEN THERE DONE THAT

[Admiral Kirk]

HAHA THIS GIRL WAS LIKE "YOU'RE DELUSIONAL" AND I WAS LIKE "HAHAHA I AGREE!!!" AND SHE WAS LIKE: >:l HEH HEH HEH.

[Admiral Kirk]

HAHA. I WONDER WHAT THAT'S LIKE.

[Forever Hidden]

I KNOW RIGHT.

CAPS ARE NICE RIGHT
THEY MAKE YOU SOUND NICE

[Admiral Kirk]

EXACTLY.

RIGHT? AND LOUD.

[Forever Hidden]

nah

[Admiral Kirk]

Oh yeah, this sounds louder.

[Forever Hidden]

Yeah exactly :3

[Admiral Kirk]

I see!!! :D

[Lady Celery]

This poem reminds me of someone. It's very good! But it's also very sad, and dark. I liked the emotion that was put into it, it worked very well :) nice work

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you very much miss/sir! :)

[Lady Celery]

miss! haha

[A. L. Allen]

This is so sad! D':

You did an amazing job of capturing the emotion in this piece. I also like the alternating colors of the text. Just adds a little something more. :)

Keep it up!

[Forever Hidden]

Thanks!! :DDD

[TroubledMindsX]

Ahh this is so emotional!

[Forever Hidden]

Yo girl
...
Thanks for the review

[rnuff]

Wow really deep and emotional,
expressed your feelings very well.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you for the rview ^^

[rnuff]

N/P

[JustMeeSarah]

This is gorgeous! It captures emotion so well

[Forever Hidden]

Thanks!
I thought you left haha XD

[JustMeeSarah]

Nope, I'm waiting on you to message me back!

[Forever Hidden]

You messaged me? O.o I didn't get it.. Either that or I replied or it didn't come to you

[Dark Rider]

Lovely, Sky. I think you did a pretty nice job summing up the feelings here, even though you never realy stated what was causing that pain. It's still a great poem. Amazing job! :)

[Dark Rider]

Well, it's great. :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Great poem. Raw, pure. Good work.