THE DISCUSSION

THE DISCUSSION

A Poem by kollaboratyve
"

IN HOPE THAT WE STUDY WAR NO MORE

"

There was a discussion about combustion and how to blow up things

 the contact of concussion of hard delivered dreams.

All be it, we went through the previsions of pretensions and brilliant inventions

unheard of until now an once a sacred cow.

Now back to the discussion about combustion and how to blow up things.

The composition that reach the sky carrying winds acid rain,

dispassionate ethnic cleansers of breast-less dispersant daughters,

screaming infants can no longer drink

only death their barter!

that long ,long, dream.

 In the eyes of the earth I saw another dissuasion

one of  blood washed diamonds and a place called invasions

about impression's of repercussions and a discussion of how to blow up things

stretched out hands to the heavens til deliverance come

 remove the landmarks of progression of all the ancients ones

 There was a discussion about combustion and confessing evil schemes shield your eyes

oh! windows of thy soul 

musings commotions steady yourself

the end is near

hearts of men faint-less in fears

There was a discussion about combustion of repercussion

from imprecations and allocations of allegations and invitations

pass from the hands of generations the torch of eternal destination

There was a discussion about combustion and how to blow up things

© 2008 kollaboratyve


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I have to totally agree with everyone...
I read this and had to come back to it. It is so thought provoking that it
takes you (mentally) to several places. The first for me was fear... I don't know why-yeah I do.
I wanted to come up with something to really state my feelings, and I couldn't.
I love reading literature like this, because so much is stirred in me.
I can say that I applaud you!
This was incredible...

Posted 15 Years Ago


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A demonstration of vocabulary carrying a not so subtle message Well presented in poetic prose I would like to hear this performed

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Wow, that is very deep and full of emotion. It is true, though, who wants to talk about war anymore? I like the way you presented the words across the page, no one has indented it to the right, it was good. thanks.

kena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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