Perhaps

Perhaps

A Poem by Belle



Suddenly I realize --
That if my mind freed my heart I would live ;
in the armor of love and beyond.

© 2013 Belle


Author's Note

Belle
" A novelist can tell story in 20 000 words; poet can show it in 20 words. "

Challenged by that statement, I tried how far I can go by 20 words -- and, here it is.

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I believe you have achieved what you sought out to do, which is to break down an idea to its most vital and pure core. It is not unlike what the physicist attempts to do with the atom... He knows there is something smaller lurking within, smaller than the electron and the quark. He seeks it out as a matter of truth. The poet here is doing the same. Also want to point out the tone of your piece, and how you used the –––dash, then consequently used the semi-colon; and slow the reader down, ––––making your point. This is the second well written snippet of a poem, I've read today. Well done, Belle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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very simple very short but can be explained in books.....i really liked this qute

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and on subject, but it's awesome what can someone create! :)
Great job, keep up the good work Belle!

Posted 9 Years Ago


An epiphany!
Great thought. Not a bad mindset to live by, either.
Well done, Belle.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice; makes a good point. Hearts should be free.

Posted 9 Years Ago


yes, i like this very much!

we take home the forest but we choke it with the smoke of fear,
in your mind a creature lives out at war, when you are sleeping :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful. Short but very powerful indeed. =)
I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh yes! Short, deep and lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love does not reign free when fears and logic bridle it. Few but strong words, Belle, excellent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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