Overflowing

The baggage I carry

wasn't packed by me.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Wow, that's an exciting picture and poem that leads to other implications. It inspired me to write this gift poem for you which you may keep.

Escaping garments
attack a girl in her bed
as she fights 'em off.

[icelandicblue]

That's absolutely splendid. Great visual. Thank you for your gift of a poem and how it made me smile.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, blue! It was fun to write after being inspired.

[Jack...]

And you say I am a master of words. Blue, so sweet and deep. If only we could carry that baggage for you.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Jack.

[s y e]

Haha, this made me laugh, Blue. Thanks for the giggle! :) It speaks loads in two lines, hehe.

~ Noodle x

[icelandicblue]

It is good to laugh. Thanks

[s y e]

I think you should offload that baggage and put in the dumpster.

[icelandicblue]

I couldn't agree more! I won't even look inside.

[s y e]

Good, don't look back either!

[DCT ponderings]

Well this is a very full concept pack into such brevity. Made me smile.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much.

[shythatway]

Yes :) So much well said in just three lines.. ((I'm including the title).

[icelandicblue]

Thanks

[Sarah]

this although short says milllions of words. this displays a picture of some burdon. this is simply prefect.

[Angi]

This short piece say a lifetime full of words. It was one of my top contender's, Ice! I really liked it. Angi~

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

So true... We all carry baggage, and most of the time it is related to something or someone else; but in the carrying, we make it our own. Interesting little piece.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks, I wrote it for Angi's conserve your words contest.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Nicely done!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Seems to be quite a bit of that going around.

[icelandicblue]

I agree with you. Thanks.

[David Scott]

This is like a great T- shirt or coffee mug quote!
I have to laugh at the commonality of these words.
Still, it is now your baggage. Until you drop it or unpack it.
Food for thought.

[icelandicblue]

Thank so much David.