Those Days...

Those Days...

Those days where you have a big exam coming up,

But you can’t seem to focus.

Those days where you try to do something right,

But nothing goes your way.

Those days where you are really tired,

But you can’t sleep.

Those days where you need someone to lean on,

But nobody is free.

Those days where you have second thoughts,

But you know you can’t say them.

Those days where you start regretting the big decisions in life,

But you know it’s too late.

Those days where you do something wrong,

But you don’t even realise that it was your fault.

Those days where you feel like crying,

But the tears stay blocked up.

Those days where you think you’re the only one who has had them,

But the truth is; we’ve all had those days.

Author's Note

Grammar isn't the best, and if there is any confusion, please let me know. Any feedback would be much appreciated, constructive criticism is welcome, and thanks for taking your time to read my Poem.
P.S: My first ever Poem attempt, so please excuse errors.

Reviews

[Neon]

A poem's well penned. I liked the flow. It's adorably written. Theme's great, it's seemed like Memories ... Great job.

[M. Stein]

I love how relatable this is, it was an amazing read. You have a gift of making the reader view just what emotion you wish to convey. Good job! xx.

[Gemma :)]

Well, thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

[Nonny]

This is to true for words.

[Gemma :)]

Yes, yes it is.

[krish]

Very good and a sensible write that i've read from you. The flow and imaginary both're awesome.

[Gemma :)]

Oh uh, thanks :)

[krish]

your welcome :)
so, why don't we discuss on this write more... what you think ? (as i know that this's a site and we can here discuss the same topic and raise our skills on the same one... )

[Gemma :)]

Oh uhm...sure why not :)

[krish]

Sounds Great, let's start discussion now :)
so, how you got only this idea to write ?

[Gemma :)]

What do you mean?

[krish]

I meant, from where you got this idea... like is it came from your life, or other's life ?

[Gemma :)]

I've seen people having those days, where nothing works out for them and it keeps getting worse. Then when I experienced it, I knew how it felt to be them, so i wrote about it :)

[krish]

OK... yes, i was probably thinking the same because it's so real and having so much real material. Tht's why i became curious to know more of it.
so, here, how can you relate this write "THOSE DAY" with your real life... ? can you or not /?
or do you think it should be or not ???

[Gemma :)]

Yes, I can. I'm sure everyone has 'Those days', it's only normal. I've had days where nothing goes right, and I keep asking myself "why? why me?" but that's life, everyone has them.

[krish]

Nice answer :) i didn't even thought in this way..
so, how can you get some relief from your this word "why" or how can every body get some relief from this single word "WHY" ?

[Gemma :)]

Thanks :)
Good question! I usually get so overwhelmed, and just can't cope. I get to the point that I open the door and run, I know people say "running away won't help your problems" but I say "it's not running away from them, it's confronting them, they can't control your life"!!
Well, some people actually ask "why does god let these things happen? why doesn't he change them? why does he let it happen", I'm not one of those people who is going to say "It's only human. It happens. You'll get over it", NO, I know they don't work I know how these people feel but the truth is no one knows why they happen, no one actually knows the truth about it, we just have to accept that life has given us a challenge! Life throws many things at you, Face it; show it that you can do anything you set your mind to. Tell it, make it know you are strong, you won’t back away and any obstacle it chucks at you, you can take it. Be an inspiration, to everyone who suffers. Life is a journey, don’t let it pick you up and drop you down. Believe in yourself and you CAN do anything!
That's my only advice, sorry if it didn't help, I confuse most people :/

[krish]

My pleasure :)
well, it's i think an incredible answer to my question i must say. you're a great knowledge of life i think and no .. no.. you didn;t confuse me... lol
you know what.. what i think about this "why" word "
i think and i believe that "The life's one and it's covered positivites and negativities as well so, if we;re already trapped in this negativity we always got this word "WHY" but if we're in positic=vity of life and do think positive then we got also the same word "WHY" then what makes a difference in b/q there two poles of life (positive an negative) ?
what or how it's different from life ?
i do know that, if we think positive then this "why" word always comes in our mind with some new opportunities, reality, offers, new future and with a "BRIGHT LIGHT TO MOVE AHEAD ON IT"... but
if we think negative then this the same word "why" comes and gets enter in our life with some "pain, hurt, sorrow and moreover with "ENOUGH DARK LIGHTS TO GET PULL INSIDE IN IT" AND GET LOST IN THESE DARK LIGHT"...

So, At last, In a nutshell, "this "why" word always comes with some new creativity to us, there's only a need to get/acceept it or how we take this "why" word in our life and live with it....

what you think about my suggestion .. ? is that thoughtful ?

[Gemma :)]

There is one thing though, everyone is difference which means everyone hurts differently. We can give OUR advice to them BUT it's what we think would help or what helps us, it might not necessarily help them...this is my main concern...

Yes, indeed it was :)

[krish]

yes, i do totally agree with you.. but i've one my advice on it too that "we can give OUR advice then it depends on us what kinda ADVICE we give to other and how the other one accept out advice in what manner (depends on other)...

:)

[Gemma :)]

Yes, the other person is always a worry :/ We don't actually know how they feel, because we ARE NOT them.

[krish]

yeah.. "WE'RE NOT THEM" :)

[Gemma :)]

Exactly!! :)

[krish]

:)
so, now do you want this discussion should be continue or not ? :) (i'm really enjoying this disscussion with you )

[Gemma :)]

Sure, if you want to :)

[krish]

wow, sounds great.... !
are you too enjoying this ? :)

[Gemma :)]

Yes, very much so :)

[krish]

hey, you know what we can raise our skills by doing such kinda discussions.. and becomes good frnds too as well.... what you think ?

[Gemma :)]

Sounds great, nice idea :)

[krish]

;)
ok... now let's do one thing, we take on topic on which we'll make own writes and we'll discuss on it...
so, after today, when you'll be on this site ?

[Gemma :)]

Okay, sure :)
I'll be on this site tomorrow but after that, I won't be on until Thursday...family issues

[krish]

well, i' think me too won't be able to get some time to you this week or after .. because now my holidays've been over ...anyway, hey, what you think if we meet here on next sunday ?

[Gemma :)]

So are mine :/
Sure, sounds good :)

[krish]

ok...
take care until sunday comes and don't forget me... lol
bye.

[Gemma :)]

I won't, haha.
Take care, goodbye.

[Xerclipse]

Oh boy I can relate to this. Not so nice when one of those days comes by. This was an excellent poem!

But hey that's life for you!

[Gemma :)]

Thank you very much!

[Taylor H.]

I liked this poem. I think everyone can relate to having "one of those days". Its just human nature. Thank you for posting this to the group! :D Nice job.

[Gemma :)]

Yeah, it's only normal to have those days. Thank you! :)

[Tylar Salter]

I love it especially if it's a first attempt.

[Gemma :)]

Thanks! I really appreciate it, glad you like it :)

[Jen]

This poem sounds fine to me :)
I like it!!!

[Gemma :)]

Thank you very much!

[Jen]

You're welcome :)

[Kiacarter93]

This is a great poem for your first attempt! I can relate :)

[Gemma :)]

Thank you!

[Kiacarter93]

Your Welcome