To Have Danced Upon This World

The art of being a ballerina is her universe, searching for fullfillment is found For the Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Body  artful and slender listens to the classical lyrics of the waves

Seagulls yell their appluade as she dances upon the sandy beach

Immense pleasure entwines within her image

Solitude waves in the wind as she spreads her arms gracefully

The ocean's music plays on in absolute joy

 

The pristine sunrise dance in shades of primary colors that

 become emphatic against the horizon

Emotional sensation encloses her heart

She pirouettes, twirling on pointed toes as the tempo of the waves change rhythm

Bright reflections of her existence promote a smile

 

She recognizes and activate her talent to the world

Physical stamina breathes life

The art of being a ballerina relinquishes a magical universe,

searching for fullfillment is found

Divine inspiration creates beautiful choreography

 

Each performance tells a mystifying story

Ballet acquisitive in nature brings a glass of sweetness that

refreshes the soul

Creativity and love to become a prima ballerina is fashioned in each musical step

A soft glow of completion is a star of dreams coming true

 

A tutu of flirtatious moves is done with strength and no flaws

Enriched with joy she takes a bow

To have danced upon this world brings a blessing within herself

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am reminded of my second wife...she is a dancer, and really good...she used to practice her ballet often in our house...used to love watching her practice.

dancing was her escape...she needed lots of it, and it was one of her outlets...

i wish it could have helped her more.

this poem is beautiful but at the same time makes me a bit sad.

jacob

[emmajoy]

'A tutu of flirtatious moves is done with strength and no flaws ~ Enriched with joy she takes a bow ~ To have danced upon this world brings a blessing within herself'.. the way you've put that is so true: that tutu holds exactly the crisp fullness of a ballerina's skill and strength because to dance she has to have control yet beauty in every movement.

I really do see and feel the passion you have for the dance, tis lovely. A few typos don't distract from your love of and interest in ballet and the dancer.. wonderful.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Star Wolf]

This is very beautiful, full of joyful emotion and delight. Awesome poem!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

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[Raven Starhawk]

You write about the art of dance so divinely. ^^*

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

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[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very impressive poem, full of life and celebration.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

Stunning and full of motion as she dances and twirls. I enjoyed this one a lot, great job on it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[KAREN]

Beautifully written, and refreshing to read! Peaceful too!
100/100

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thamks!

[Art]

nicely written piece...ballerinas are such a beauty to watch...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Good morning, and thank you!

[Art]

yes it is a good morning...your welcome!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Lovely! The imagery is fantastic.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!

[Kenaz]

You've told her story wonderfully.

I'm not quite sure if you've goofed these lines or not :) "The art of being a ballerina relinquish a magical universe/searching for fullfillment is found"

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks!