Treasure Chest

Treasure Chest

A Poem by KATHY SUE SILLS
"

Memories tucked away for safe keeping!

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Minute by minute memories are made.

Day by day they are tucked away for safekeeping,

in the treasure chest of hearts.

© 2011 KATHY SUE SILLS


Author's Note

KATHY SUE SILLS
Hope you like it, tell what you think! I can delete it!

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Sweet and to the point..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is short and sweet and says a lot in such a few words. It gives such a warm feeling. But I would love to see you use this idea to build a longer poem of all the memories held in that treasure chest.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Don't delete it... It has a pleasing charm about it.

(Memories - not memoryies)

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful... you can possibly fix the y in memories & remove your i can delete comment too ... its a keeper :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


You definitely have a quotable here.
You are not eternal.

Posted 13 Years Ago


We have to keep you away from your delete button. Not all my memories are tucked away I tried to forget some of them :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I absolutely agree.:) I love your short poems, Imagination. You have a WONDERFUL ability to make a point, to touch on endearing thoughts/emotions that many readers can understand with only writing just a few lines. Perhaps power is not in the amount of words, but in the message that is given. And you always have truly inspirational messages, a beautiful view of life. I agree with everyone, deleting is out of the question.:) This is much to uplifting and should be shared don't you think.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Why would you delete this? I like it and it speaks volumes. Beautiful sentiments.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this!!! :) What do you think of making it "memories are made" since you used "THEY are tucked away"? And I have developed this thing about commas personally, and I don't think you need it after "keeping" because it breaks the flow. Just my thoughts :) This is a beauty, Never delete it! treasure chest of hearts is just a lovely image :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


it is the short poems that have the most feeling in them..dont delete this it is a very good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2011
Last Updated on March 10, 2011
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KATHY SUE SILLS
KATHY SUE SILLS

Harrisville, MS



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