The Man In Black

The Man In Black

A Story by KATHY SUE SILLS
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A man kidnaps pregnant woman and sales their baby after birth.

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     Breeann laid strapped to a bed in a dark room.  She couldn't remember how she got  there.  Her head hurt badly so maybe she'd been knocked out, she heard a noise in the darkness.  Cold blooded fear enveloped her.  She wanted to scream, but her throat closed up with fright.  A figure emerged, standing before the bed.  He had on a black mask and black clothes.  He turned an over-head light on above the bed  where she laid.  It was then she realized she was nude.  He laid a hand on her protruding belly.

     "I have a few rules to go over before we get down to business," he said in a raspy voice.

     "Who are you?" Breeann cried.

     A hard slap across the cheek vibrated the bed.  "Rule 1, you will speak only when spoken to," he said harshly. " You can call me Sir, understand?"  He pierced her with a glare. Another hard slap.  "I asked did you understand?"

     "Yes sir," she cried.

     He scratched his head as if confused.  "Now where was I? Ha yes rule 2, what I say goes because I'm in charge," he instructed.  "Rule 3, I will be inducing labor soon, There will be no pain medication." He put his hand on her belly once again and massaged gently.

     Breeann let her tears flow.  Why was he doing this? She couldn't question him because he would only get furious with her.  He continued to rub her belly.  His touch sicken her.  What were his plans for her baby? Her?

    "Rule 4, once the baby is born I will take it to its new family and recieve  a large fee," he said as if he had read her mind.  "Than I will come back and take you through your next stage.  I'm going to torment you to death," he said in a evil voice. 

     "Breeann was petrified.  "Please let me go," she begged.

     His  anger exploded. "I told you not to speak unless spoken to!" He yelled.  He held up a lighter.  "You have to be punished, after all you broke a rule," he pointed out.  He touched her upper arm with the lighter.  She arched her back in pain as flesh burned.  "have you learned your lesson?"

     Breeann gritted her teeth. "Yes sir."

     He filled a syringe. "This pitocin should get your labor started," he said as he stuck the needle in her hip. "I'm going to unstrap you as well so you can walk, that may help get labor going too," he said as he unstrapped  her arms, then her legs. He turned and walked out the room forgetting to lock the door.

     Breeann struggled to a standing position.  She began to search franticly for a weapon.  She found a poker near a fire place.  She took slow, steady steps.  She entered the kitchen, his back to her.  She raised the poker and hit him in the head.  She ran toward the front door slinging it open. She didn't take the time to cover herself, she didn't know how long he would be unconscious. Breeann ran out in the darkness.  She ran into the dark woods, it was then a pain started in her lower back gripping her midsection.  The pain was so intense she clamped her hand over her mouth to keep from screaming.  She knew he would be looking for her.  Breeann had no doubt that sir was knowledgeable of these woods and could find her even in the darkness.

© 2013 KATHY SUE SILLS


Author's Note

KATHY SUE SILLS
Tell me what you think!
I'll probably come out with a part 2!
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interesting symbolism . Carl Jung , says in dreams we are all of the characters . a part 2 would be enlightening

Posted 12 Years Ago


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oh creepy - and yes I agree with selene - I love the construction of it - the vocabulary is great too! and definitely do a part 2! would like to see how it continues! nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this will certainly appeal to the bestseller readership demographic!~ curt paragraphs and clear cut descriptives!~

Posted 12 Years Ago


O_O woah! Please update soon! Very chilling I'm excited for the next update :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chilling! A maniacal evil that lurks around every corner...
In this case poor Breeann doesn't know what she's in for?
Great imagery....

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really want to see part 2!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very powerful story. Your strong story brought me in and held my attention. I like the fear of mystery and her desire to survive. The open ending left a opening for another chapter. Thank you for a excllent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This horror write sure made me shiver! How did she end up in such a place and what happens to her now? Incredible!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oooh! Very chilling! It sure is an attention getter. I say this is awesome. Great horror!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very dark and scary! Great job and I hope you do another, I want to know what happens to her and her baby.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 15, 2011
Last Updated on October 19, 2013
Tags: Killer, Pregnant, Babies, Sale

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KATHY SUE SILLS

Harrisville, MS



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