A Vampire's Confession

For the creative Poetry Group

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anticapation sweeps over her.

Hands tap the steering wheel.

Desire bubbles in explosions of lust.

Tonight Henry Fitzoy is going to ask her to marry him,

at least that is what she wants.

 

The Moon is full tonight,

setting a perfect mood for a proposal.

She thought it odd to be meeting at such a late

hour, the midnight hour.

His cafe called Blood Ties is where he wants

to  meet.

 

The darkness seems to be his home.

At night he is carefree and happy.

During the day he becomes a ghost.

She doesn't understand him,

but she loves him just the way he is.

 

The parking lot is free of cars.

Candle light flickers through the window pane.

Romance is written all over this night.

A school girl giggle escapes her lips.

Heat flushs her face.

 

"My darling, you're finally here," Henry murmurs.

Dreamy eyes stare at her.

Sexual desire becomes almost painful.

Need burns inside like a hot flame.

 

"Where is your customers?" She asks. "You never

close early," she adds.

Music plays on an old juke box.

He walks toward her with a gleem in his eyes.

 

"This night is just for you my love."

Hot breath cascades down her neck.

Hands fundle her breast.

Need builds between her legs.

Need builds inside him for her blood.

Tonight He hopes that she'll be his forever.

 

"Chloe, I love you so much," he confesses.

 

"Oh Henry, I'm head over heels for you too."

 

For a moment they dance.

Two love birds caught up in each other.

He was human as she,

not a vampire out for blood.

Would she except him as who he is?

Join him in his world?

 

"We need to talk, Chloe." He takes her by the hand.

He pulls a chair out.

 

"This must be serious," she whispers.

 

He sits down across from her.

"It is."

 

She picks up a knife to cut a piece of cheese.

"Ouch!"

Blood drips from her finger.

His face contorts with agony.

Strong hands take her finger.

Slowly and seductively he sucks the blood,

savorying the taste.

 

Bewildering eyes stare at him.

"You don't know what I am."

 

"What do you mean?" Adreneline rushes through her.

She waits for him to answer.

 

"I don't want to loose you," he whispers.

 

"You're not, I would never leave you."

 

"Haven't you ever wondered why you don't see me during the day?" He asks.

 

"Yes, but it doesn't matter, I love you," she tells him.

 

He closes his eyes and bares his fangs.

Silence.

He expects screaming.

 

"I want you so much right now."

 

"But I'm a vampire."

 

"Just shut up and bite me," she begs.

 

Clothes fall to the floor.

Teeth sinks into neck.

He thrust inside of her.

Sweet relief enters them both.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Had to write a poem with conversation with a vampire!
Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

Incredible!!! I LOVE vampires!!! Great poem and p.s.- love the new profile pic!

[Searching 4 Serenity]

WOOT! is the word of the day. It even has my name in it ^.=.^
The ending made me chuckle quite a bit. "Just shut up and bite me!" lol
I must agree with realmwriter. This is definitely more of story than a poem.

[InkSlinger]

I think I agree with Realmwriter, it has the feel of a story, more than poem, but regardless of the structure, it was pretty good overall.. Little saucy.. like the added spice, it gave the whole piece a little flavor..

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

It was a good poem.

"Clothes fall to the floor.

Teeth sinks into neck.

He thrust inside of her.

Sweet relief enters them both."

That stanza successfully tied up everything well.

[realmwriter]

To me it reads more like a story than a poem but thats just me. I like the way you discribe the intense desire between the two of them. She knew he was a vampire or at least thats the way it reads to me. She knew and was not affraid infact she wanted it as well as he wanted her... Very well stated but I would think about rewriting it to read less like a story. I wuold make sugestions but I am not the writer of this piece. Hope you dnot take offense, I mean none. I really like it infact...!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good yaa..!! Great job..!!!

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, without hesitation, she submitted to the unending future of a vampire.
What a moving poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

A little unconditional love and uncontrollable lust.
Sweet combination.