Feasting On Springs Bounty

 

Miniscule caterpillar munching on a green leaf,

yearns to sip succulent nectar from seasonal bounty

Spins a cocoon, and falls asleep

When he awakes colorful delicate wings apparel his back

He takes fight, lands on a budding rose to taste sweet Spring

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something refreshing!

Reviews

Now that is refreshing, wow. The change from a larva to a butterfly I always found something magical... This intrigues me only more around me to feel with nature, you wrote this beautifully! compliments.

[Danielle Renee]

I like the imagery and diction. Way to go!

[An owl on the moon]

Your glimpse of spring awakens the wonder and warmth I so long for... It is a time of refreshing and enchantments as earth shakes of winter slumbers and embraces renewed life!

[Penlady]

Something refreshing indeed! Just a beautiful vision.

[hmm]

Such a lovely write here.
Simply enjoyable

[Rick Puetter]

Simple. Direct. Concise. A noble summary for the Rite of Spring.

Greatly enjoyed. High marks!

Best regards,

Rick

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very refreshing ans so so Spring. Love this poem it is truly beautiful.

Chloe

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wonderful..!!!

[Raven Starhawk]

For me this was so relaxing to read. I am not sure whether it was the imagery in my head or your details that provoked such imagery, but either way this was great.

[Brad]

nice-so much more fun to say aloud with the consanants rolling from tip of tongue...beautiful