Transformation

watch it live.

souls.

our morals - allies with our heart.

we're hungry.

our actions necessary - behaviour animalistic.

we feed.

can be bread - can be tamed.

but born.

we are the same - animals.

our tendencies evolutionary - turn greedy.

we tear.

ripping each other apart for we are hungry - emotionally.

glutinous, we continue.

until nothing remains.

sad in sorrow at what we have become.

humans.

Reviews

[Chris]

Wanting is NOT the same as admitting WHO we want... let alone whys.

[emipoemi]

O - M - freaking - G this is good! My only critique is that the second "hungry" is more powerful than the first, to which I suggest (if I may) that you find a different word with which to substitute the first. For repetitions should be done for emphasis that adds power to the poem as a whole while providing more insight to what the piece is doing. And though the second "hungry" IS more powerful than the first, it just comes across as a reiteration than an emphatic repetition. But everything else is sublime! (maybe play with commas as well, but that's your choice). Well done!