Constricted View

Voices rise and fall
around the café
his seems smothered
but his eyes watch
making no contact
his eyes glanced my way
and keep moving
I watch and draw
wondering
what story could he tell
as the drawing takes form
I realize my voice is also smothered
I watch but make no contact
what story would I tell

~ pencil on paper, M.C.S.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Two constricted views trying to construct a smothered dialogue. Excellent. ....:).....

[MCS]

Thank you you're always so kind with your words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....:).....