I like the thoughts and questions in the poem. Sometime sleep lead us to the dark or the light. I did like the closing lines. To fear sleep and dreams would be a bad place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I like the thoughts and questions in the poem. Sometime sleep lead us to the dark or the light. I did like the closing lines. To fear sleep and dreams would be a bad place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
"Makes me think and wonder
Am I mine to keep?
Why is it that I
am afraid to fall asleep?"
You're getting more philosophical, Devesh. I need your poetry to wise me up. ;) But seriously, I adore this poem. Simply, unpretentiously, and brilliantly worded. I missed reading you. Sorry, I had a time off.
Hehe :P No worries, Arzel, I understand, I've been taking time off myself, so haven't read much as w.. read moreHehe :P No worries, Arzel, I understand, I've been taking time off myself, so haven't read much as well. Also, my new stuff is in German, so I can't post it here :P Thank you very much for reading :))
10 Years Ago
Ahh, stun me with Chinese, French, Dutch, and Spanish in the future, okay? :)
You are w.. read moreAhh, stun me with Chinese, French, Dutch, and Spanish in the future, okay? :)
You are welcome.
10 Years Ago
I will, as soon as I get around to learning them. :)
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