Do you know

From time to time

they choose to see,

but narrow eyes

keep blinding them...

If you ask me what I love,

I would tell you I don't know,

I'm just feeling so alone

so I sing this little song.

I don't know what will be next,

will I ever get some rest,

will I ever wake from sleep,

dive again in water deep?

I don't know, but all I have

is two cold arms and borrowed legs,

something that connects them all

and the head of screamin' thoughts.

Reviews

[RainDancer1997]

Heartbreaks suck and they can leave us confused and deeply hurt. Never forget what your heart is for and over time and peace you will come to love another. You just have to find your lover with your heart and not your mind. Great write:-) you expressed the confusion and hurt very well

[isus]

thank you!

[Anjali]

Wow.... It's so good! I absolutely loved it, the emotions are so well put together, keep writing.

[isus]

glad you like it Anjali

[Anjali]

I'm glad I read it...😊

[Tiffany Boles]

Very deep, I like it. Nicely written!

[isus]

thank you :)

[SarahLin]

I certainly can relate to this and I'm sure a lot of others can too. Nicely done......

[isus]

thank you Sarah :)

[Pam]

I LOVE this!!! It definitely relates to a lot of people worldwide.

[isus]

thank you Pam :)

[DarkFantasy]

Reminds me of my first breakup. I had similar thoughts. The universality of the theme and the simplicity of the language combine to evoke tears of nostalgia in the readers.

[isus]

oh, thanx, glad you find it interesting

[Mizo4]

nice write. enjoyed reading

[isus]

Thank you :)

[Brittney]

Just amazing! Just the first stanza feels a little disconnected from the rest of the poem, but overall I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. The last stanza Is true brilliance

[isus]

great observation about first stanza, i wrote the piece and i saw that stanza standing alone on one page and i just put it on top, don't know why. glad you like it :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

wonderful emotions in a beautiful flow. xo Winter

[isus]

glad you find it that way :)

[Alene Parr]

Absolutely love the final stanza. Great poem!

[isus]

glad you like it :)