Now

is it time for me to go

or is it time at all

what i want and what you want

give me sword,

yes i will dance

dance for fire

dance for rain

dance for meaning

dance for death,

i will dance in sea of knowledge

or i will sink in worst oblivion.

Reviews

[EmilyBianca]

Great job, seems similar to stuff I write. Really liked it!

[~Beautiful Dreamer~]

This was really good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!!

[Saddam]

is it time for me to go
or is it time at all
what i want and what you want...

An Amezing poetry. Greatly penned....

[Shaquana Adams]

Those last lines were the most impacting. This was a pleasure to read isus :)
-QuanaWana

[maria ( rose)]

A pleasure to read very well written isus
maria rose♥

[Oyindamola Shoola]

I love this poem particularly because it is realistic....dance for fire, dance for rain, dance for meaning, dance for death.. all these must come in ones life.....mere looking at this poem, it might seem simple and short but I am certain that there is more to it than the way it looks....well penned

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I'm not sure what I'm reading about here.
The rhythms and the use of repetition are fine.
Last 2 lines are great.
Sorry I can't say more.

[Hibiki]

This poem is quiet good~
Great job!

[Brittany Zedalis]

I love those last two lines. This flows perfectly and you chose some awesome vocabulary. Really awesome work.