Now

Now

A Poem by isus

is it time for me to go
or is it time at all
what i want and what you want
give me sword,
yes i will dance
dance for fire
dance for rain
dance for meaning
dance for death,
i will dance in sea of knowledge
or i will sink in worst oblivion.

© 2014 isus


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Deep and intereting work, so many various dances you discuss:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dancing comes in many forms and serves it own distinctive purposes in every culture...on reading your words, I found myself pondering the diversity of the dance as an element of the proverbial Human Condition. As mentioned in the review below, you've said much in this short piece and captured my imagination in the process...a fine work you've penned :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


there are so many emotions here in so few words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

and so short time
hmmm... this is great, deep and thought provoking, the last two lines are really striking me...

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

thanx on reading :)

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brod na savi, Croatia



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