Alive

Pain takes her life. 

She wonders why,

Why is she still alive?

Her once bright moon darkened.

Hope has washed away.

But she is still alive.

Each day seems pointless.

Each night a mess.

So why must she live?

Only one can end this.

But that one seems gone.

Leaving her hollow 

And lost in a painful life. 

Reviews

[Hidden_identity]

The emotion of the poem drips off of every word. The flowing of the poem is excellent. Well done.

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There was some repetition in vocabulary but overall it lays out the emotion. Nice work.