Prologue

this is a story of a girl

whose life she knew it

shattered

and as she watched the twinkling pieces 

Fall below her

she came to understand

they weren't worth the cuts 

so as she twisted in mid-air

the blood just crystal-like droplets above her

she fell to her fate

the years seemed to fly past her

everyone leaving

her family

her lovers

her friends

all gone, gone, gone in the wind

the same wind that gave her the final push

the push that leads us here

this is just the story of a girl

and her tragic fate

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Yikes. I don't know if I'm in the mood for this today *laugh* Just kidding, jenny; I'll give it a go. Thanks for sharing.

[Britt]

Good start! I like it. :) The only thing i'm gonna suggest is, be sure to capatilze the beginning of the word at each sentence. ^_^ otherwise, good job. :)