I still miss you

I still miss you

A Poem by silver threaded queen

did you miss me
did you love me
did you hate me
did you loath me
did you ever feel a need to cry over me
I miss you
and every damn day it gets worse
I love you
and my heart feels like it will shatter
I hate you
and it grows every damn day
I loath you
for unknown reasons
I still miss you
and I guess a part of me always will
I still love you
but a part of me hopes I grow out of that

© 2010 silver threaded queen


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this is good

Posted 11 Years Ago


like i said, your an amazing writer and keep it up!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This feels like a relationship ending that had gone bad. It still hurts even though ending it was for the best, it just still hurts and all you can do is pray the pain and longing will go away. Getting angry doesn't help, only healing will. I think you did a wonderful job on this poem. I've walked that walk before.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A good example of the mixed emotions some people hold over us, especial those who have taken away big pieces of our hearts. Good Love/Hate contrast here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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