A Love is New

Love, what else?

 

A Love is New

 

 

A light shines

this beacon of truth, of hope,

sending forth its shimmering guide

when darkness falls…

 

~so lost to time~

 

a song is sung,

lifting to the heart, the soul

harmonies afloat the wind

in every step we climb…

 

~happily lost among~

 

flower blooms,

so sweet the scent, the charm,

painted in the color of nature,

their life a rising sun…

 

~somewhere beneath the moon~

 

a child smiles

without a worry, a care,

joy does fill its eyes,

life now begins

 

~in precious style~

 

a blue bird flies

upon the wind, the breeze

freedom claims its heart

in endless boundaries…

 

~before its eyes~

 

forms a view

within two hearts it learns, it lives

truth finds the dreams

eternal it shall be…

a love is new

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Just love your style here Jack.. what can I say.. I am a fan... ♥ Rose

[Jack...]

Still smiling here my sweet friend.

[shallimarRose]

still sighing here Jack.. lol.. xo

[smilempsn]

that was so light..n so flowy..
I loved how u wrote in between stanzas.. *Might use it somewhere in my work too * ^-^

[Jack...]

Thanks so much and be my guest.

[Shivam Murari]

The presentation, is one brilliantly fascinating part of the poem. Those between-the-stanzas phrases ascend and then descend in terms of words and they brilliantly define each stanza. This is what we science students do while reading books, even though it is not done as beautifully and flawlessly as you do :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I suppose there is something scientific about poetry. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Shivam Murari]

I agree. Poetry, according to me, is quite scientific field of literature :-) And I can say that, being a student of science :)

[InsanityWriter]

So airy and ethereal... I love it. ^_^ Great work, as always. :]

[Jack...]

Thanks so much for stopping by this morning. You are my sunrise this day.

[TL Boehm]

quiet, romantic, gentle...a summery whisper of a poem.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Beautiful! I love the flow.
Nice job, Jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Ency Bearis]

Awesome lyrical poem, brilliant write.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure, you're welcome

[Zahra]

this is like a beautiful song of love, that goes straight to one's heart. Flows so nicely. Loved it.

[Zahra]

this is like a beautiful song of love, that goes straight to one's heart. Flows so nicely. Loved it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This one is quite nice on the page. I love the form...a little unorthodox, but sublime and sensually beautiful at the same time. You have a beautiful way with imagery; choosing just the right emotions and juxtaposition of feelings. Well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sarah. I tried to write this so that the offset lines could work with either the prior verse or the next.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

It worked nicely :)