Definitive love

How I felt the day I met you

 

 

 

Definitive love

 

 

Violet moons

in lavender skies

Whispers on raindrops

and twilight kissed sighs

Buttercup daydreams

in rose petal white

Define my thoughts

of you on this night

 

Pine cone aromas,

and cool morning dew

Mountain top moments,

a beautiful view

Snow flurry sonnets

and orchids at play

Define my love

for you on this day

 

Butterfly wishes,

blue oceans a' dance

Porcelain passions

and springtime romance

Sweet chocolate visions

of everything new

Define this man

the day he found you

 

      

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kristallo]

My goodness, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. The words are full and aromatic, and so delicately sweet. Such a gift for illuminating the senses, you have, each choice of word is so charming and scintillatingly strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss. This is so heart-warmingly lovely, Jack, in a style that you execution so masterfully that it takes my breath away in each read through. Immaculate. Well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kristallo. Your review is poetry to me, "strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss" That was beautiful.

[Kristallo]

My pleasure. :)

[shallimarRose]

Beautiful as always Jack...

[Jack...]

Thank you Rose.

[SyberRose]

A lovely romantic read Jack...loved every stanza...Rose

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rose. Your kind words have brought a smile to my face today.

[Astro]

Great wordplay in this one Jack, full of mystery yet abundantly clear.

[Jack...]

Thank you Astro for your kind review

[Astro]

You're most welcome.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A crafted piece that runs well.

[Jack...]

Thomas, you flatter me. Thank you so much

[icelandicblue]

You've used cool colors to create such a warm and lovely scene. It's really lovely.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Anne. I turly appreciate your sweet words to me.

[sakshi arora]

Wow just wow I have never Sen romanticizing so subtle yet being so powerful . I am. Flattered

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Zahra]

Really sweet, this poem feels like fresh breeze, beautifully woven!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Zahra

[Emerald Seas]

Jack, Jack, Jack... What a glorious expression of love. You're definitely in tune with your soul's desires and express it so passionately on the page. Most men I believe have this place within. Unfortunately more often than not, there's a monster ego or fear of rejection that smothers that love - cornering it into a barred cell deep within! ;-)
double kudos to you, this is grand writing!

[Jack...]

My friend, I thank you for always offering such kind words to me. I keep my ego in check, I just want to make others happy. As far as rejection, I don't fear it because it has happened so much we are now pretty good friends. :)>

[Emerald Seas]

Haha - thanks for the laugh! Next time you pass by rejection, say "hello" for me ;-)

[Jack...]

So that was you!!!!!!!!!!!

[Emerald Seas]

We had quite a tangle once ;-) next time rejection passes by me I'm gonna kick its little a*s... Of course I don't think I'll be near it ever again since I'm hitched - and if ever single again tI'm gonna be the old cat lady... Remember? ;-)

[Jack...]

Yes I do remember...the old cat lady...sounds like a poem in there somewhere to me...be on the look out.

[Emerald Seas]

Uhhhh ohhhh! ;-) oh dear... The 25 character police just got me - did I make it? Jeez, what is that new feature? Quite annoying

[Jack...]

It definitely is. I am going to start writing..."Twenty-five characters say, that was a great poem.

[Jack...]

I agree with our Kris, for this is exceptional writing dear Jack, To almost gild "definitive love" with the color purple, I do like, for it is innovative, headstrong, and what can make love grand ... in variety! This piece is just a ode to all lovers and, a beautiful message within. Thank you my dear friend! Fantastic.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Elisa. It is so nice to have you visit my pages again. I like making people happy and if this made you happy, then I am happy.

Let's be so happy together Jack! for it did!! :) thanks once again, you bring the site always good poetry!

[TL Boehm]

Sigh...You're making my prickly little heart soften like gum on a hot sidewalk. STOP IT! The second verse. That's the one that made me get all watery eyed - and gaze away from the PC for a moment and sigh. Such lovely imagery.

[Jack...]

Tammy, if I made your heart soften like gum on a hot sidewalk, then I know my poetry has done its job. thank you so very much my great friend.