Smile Noodle, smile

Smile my friend

 

 

 

Smile Noodle, smile

 

Smile Noodle, smile

things will be ok

you will see tomorrow

comes a brand new day

 

The sun will start by shining

the air will feel so clean

trees will wave good morning

just like in a dream

 

Posies will be blooming

beautiful you'll see

serving up some nectar

to a bumblebee

 

Blue birds will be singing

in harmonizing style

butterflies will call your name

smile Noodle, smile

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Inda]

This very effective, i can see why people give the awws! It's almost like a lullaby in terms of the rhyme and structure, i mean it's really amazing how versatile your work is. I'm sure Noodle liked it too. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[TL Boehm]

Aww. I think that's the second awww I've given you. I hope Noodletoodle was blessed by this. I know I would be. Love this part especially Posies will be blooming
beautiful you'll see
serving up some nectar
to a bumblebee

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tammy. I am going to have to keep track of those "aws" because from you they are worth more than anything.

[Dean Kuch®]

What a frolicking, inspirational piece, Jack. The rhythm is remarkable, the word choices, impeccably done. How could one read this and not greet the following brand new day with a smile?

Magnificent work, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks Dean, I appreciate you reading and commenting. Just a little fun to break up someone's frown.

[ANTO]

Enchanting and uplifting Jack. Nice way to use this 'gift of ours' (Our Cosa Nostra)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sir. I appreciate you stopping by.

[ANTO]

The pleasure was mines. Your welcome Jack.

[ayosonolowo]

Really good poem
very interesting to read

[Jack...]

Thanks, I hope it made you smile too.

[ayosonolowo]

Yea!!
You're welcom

[Zahra]

Really sweet, lovely poem with a beautiful gesture that brings hope and encouragement.

[Jack...]

Thank you Zahra, did it make you smile?

[Zahra]

You're welcome, and yes it did. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the positive and hopeful poem. We need to smile. Allowed the frustration of life to disappear. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jack...]

Thank you for stopping by, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and to leave such kind words.

[Barbara Walker]

A sweet uplifting piece! Great flow and structure!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Barbara

[MandaBear]

I hope Noodle does smile with this because I know I did!

[Jack...]

Then I am smiling too. Thank you so much, I am happy to bring a smile to your face my friend.

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Gosh Noodle gets all the press. *Grin* That's fine. When you're young, you are almost always popular, when you get up to my age, you have to have more than good looks to help ya get by like your wits and intelligence, but having all three doesn't hurt either. :7

And after Noodlehead reads this, I imagine she will be smiling, for she is surrounded by friends - and she should never forget that.
Nicely written cheer, Jacki.

Of all the tributes to Noodle so far, I favorited this one for it's plucky musical style:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/nickelbacklover2/1200254/

[Jack...]

Thank so much for your kind words. I appreciate them and I'm sure she does too.

[Jack...]

You see, I'm not a bad guy afterall.

[dw817]

No problem, love the cheery sun BTW. :)