Angi Senryu

Angi, this one's for you

 

She always said no

That is when I realized

I’m no Hugh Jackman

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Funny, I might have to fight Angi for this one....two Jacks in one poem, can't go wrong with that.

[Jack...]

Thank so my my friend.

[Astro]

Hahah, nice one Jack! I'm not versed enough in Senryu to critique, but I know what I like.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Astro.

[Astro]

No prob, buddy!

[shallimarRose]

Thers a couple of Angis here better be careful ...
I dont know where it came from but this was cute..
lol xo Rose

[Jack...]

This Angi knows who she is. Thanks Rose.

[Zahra]

nice seryu for angi... Enjoying your senryus a lot

[Jack...]

Thanks Zahra

[Pryde Foltz]

hahahahahahhahahhahahahahah

[Jack...]

Thanks Pryde

[Rita L. Sev]

HA! This is great - but do not despair - remember, Hugh Jackman is no Poet Jack... :)

[Jack...]

I keep telling myself that. Thanks Rita

[Angel]

Hugh Jackman *sigh*
ooooooohhhhhhhh....
What an absolutely beeee you teee fulll man.....
*sigh*

[Karen]

Hahaha! Oh the day we realize that we are not the hotness we thought we were! Haha! This is a funny senryu and there's so much honesty in it. Great write!

[Jack...]

Thank you Karen.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Ha! There is no one like Hugh Jackman.. sorry Jack! That man curls my toes... *sighs* oh and this is a great senryu for Angi =D

[Jack...]

Thanks Lori.

[ShelleyA]

A delightful write, Jack. Creative with excellent use of brevity and humor. A skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Good flow and tone. I'm sure Angi will love it. Good depth of feeling. I love the aha moment in line three. Good word choice. Well penned and most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Shelley.

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome and my pleasure. Have a good night!