I seek not its light

dreaming in the wee hours of the morning

 

 

 

I seek not its light

 

I cast my eyes towards the sun,

beyond the darkened fence, the fielded midnight thoughts,

watching, through clouded images, knowing eventually

I will witness the birth of a new day

 

I reach with my smile in a curved line

seeking a destiny still unknown but written

in words of future phrases,

which will come to pass…on multi-colored wings of affection

 

I send my heart on waves of scented mist,

collected from the corners of my world,

flowing free from silent words and favored gestures

of desire’s endless intentions

 

I hand my love to nature, freely, willingly…

so that it may be delivered amidst

blooming jasmine and truer promises…to you,

before another dawn’s light finds your beauty and you awake

 

I cast my eyes towards the sun…yet I seek not its light,

nor its warmth…for all I seek is you

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I cast my eyes towards the sun…yet I seek not its light,
nor its warmth…for all I seek is you

A fantastic write. It seems to me that the powers that be want to give you 'what' you want; they have no power to give 'who' you want.

[Jack...]

Thanks a lot Pryde, just burst my bubble why don't cha? :) Thanks so much my sweet friend. Indeed you are correct...I guess that part will be left up to me.

[writing mojo]

There is a flight pattern to this piece and it flutters, dips, and seeds the human nature you have possessed to get to this point...I hope the one you seek is named (Jasmine) because that would be the best poet justice ever served..great piece

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. Not Jasmine though.

[Frieda P]

This is quite lovely Jack, and you have your shape signature here once again, 'smiling in a curved line'...I love blooming jasmine, it adds such warmth to this sweet gesture.

[Jack...]

Yep, me and shapes...what is a poet to do? Thanks so much my friend. I always appreciate you sweet words to me.

[Ruth]

By being grounded and looking into nature....we do find what we seek...eventually, we do x

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Poppy

[redflutterby]

Some things are warmer and brighter then the sun...love the pic you chose for this one!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Angel]

Ahhh, Jack...beautiful. Each of your romantic love poems is a masterpiece...each one a beautiful dance of love.
This is certainly no exception...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. How are you feeling today?

[Angel]

I am about to go home. I'm still a bit under the weather, but they've got me well enough that I think I can handle it from here...

[Jack...]

Take care of yourself my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"I send my heart on waves of scented mist,

collected from the corners of my world,

flowing free from silent words and favored gestures

of desire’s endless intentions"

Like they say if you love someone you want the best for them , you will send them on wings of affection , you will seek them in nature too , you will have warm intentions. You have touched on all of that in this splendid poem...Bravo

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sami. I am thriiled with your comments on this poem. Greatly appreciated are you.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . Any time...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Who needs the sun's rays, when true love is all the warmth and light you need? A triumph of romantic prose, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita. Your kind words always thrill my day.